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Rust and Concrete


Rust and Concrete
Photo Information
Copyright: Gwynne Penny (Pookanoodle) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 54 W: 0 N: 16] (482)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2002-06-01
Categories: Nature
Camera: FujiFinepix 6900Z, Circular Polarizer
Exposure: f/3.4, 1/250 seconds
Details: Tripod: Yes
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2003-03-05 17:41
Viewed: 1090
Points: 4
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is the view from the waterfront at Higham Marshes, looking back towards the mainland. I have a bit of a thing about photographing rusty objects, and I liked the abstract shape and simple colours.

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  • Great 
  • adam Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 440 W: 33 N: 31] (848)
  • [2003-03-06 2:30]

Yes, I agree about the abstract shapes and simple colors. Very pleasing shot. The two-toned patch of greenery towards bottom left in the background is great.

  • Good 
  • Skorj Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor [C: 399 W: 12 N: 1] (581)
  • [2003-03-06 4:33]

The simple colors and subject present a great subject - well spotted!

A tighter framing on the subject might have increased the impact, for me a least. A few points of contrast enhancement to bring out the gray, blue and green may also help in this area.

Nice image. I like the range of textures found in the greenery, the rusty steel construction and the solid concrete and rock. Possibly cropping of part of the blue sky could improve the image.

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