Photographer’s Note
This is taken just off the quayside in Exeter on another gloomy day.
I please critique.
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missninja
(495) 2007-02-09 13:51
Hello Stephen!
To focus the element on the right side and to have a blurred background is a nice idea! It gives your picture a very special mood. Well done!
TFS!
Nina
ancient-strider
(153) 2007-02-09 13:55
Hi Stephen.
I can see what you are trying to do and I often try for the same detailed closeup. Can I suggest that the background is maybe a little too distracting. It might be better by cropping closer even as much as keeping the top right quarter only! Having said that I do like it as it stands.
Regards
Bernard
jean11-3
(2799) 2007-02-09 15:32
Welcome Stephen,I do like what you have done with this shot, the metal work in the f/g is very sharp, and I like the blurred effect in the b/g, which makes us ask a question about the buildings.Good detail with the drops of water.
Regards Jean.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Stephen Wheldon (swheldon) (11)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-02-09
- Categories: Architecture
- Camera: Praktica DCZ 5.4
- Exposure: f/3.6, 1/30 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2007-02-09 13:16








