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Waiting for him


Waiting for him
Photo Information
Copyright: Shalin Jain (shalin) Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 56 W: 6 N: 34] (135)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2005-03-27
Categories: Daily Life, Transportation
Camera: Nikon D70 DSLR, Nikkor 18-70mm 1:3.5-4.5G ED DX
Exposure: f/29.0, 1/60 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2005-04-21 1:14
Viewed: 830
Points: 10
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I clicked this snap while I was waiting for my train at Kaiseraugst Swiss railway station. I used photoshop for the first time to make a b/w. I have just began learning photoshop. I don't know how good this conversion is ... I'll post the original too.. would appreciate some feedback. thank you!


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To alvaraalto: b/w and timeless momentsshalin 2 04-26 17:53
To avis2avis: thank you!shalin 1 04-21 03:01
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  • Great 
  • cessy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2257 W: 99 N: 2336] (13536)
  • [2005-04-21 1:25]

very nice shot, Shalin
very nice catch of the moment, excellent composition.
I love the bw tones too

You captured a nice moment here. The conversion to B&W is a little soft though. You could try adjusting Selective Color (whites, neutrals and blacks) to bring in a little more contrast here.

Nice picture. I'm always curious why someone choses for B&W. I've seen the original in the WS and think that the colours are well enough. But maybe you have a special reason or just liked it.
groet Rob

Hi Shalin!
Great shot! I think you have used very well the composition to give the "waiting" feeling. And the conversion to black and white contributes a lot to the mood.

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  • jrj Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5473 W: 504 N: 7191] (32616)
  • [2005-07-01 5:01]

Simple compo with effectful details of the girl and the slowly moving train. Good choice to present in bw - giving a better mood and is well fitted for your title. Well done

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