One Boat

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• Manuj (433)
• [2008-07-19 4:28]

hello Jonas
wonderful POV
wide angle shot of the water
frame is filled up with nice blue
nicely composed
nice light

regards
MAnuj MEhta

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• aadilj (10726)
• [2008-07-19 4:32]

Wow thats an exceptionally lovely idea which brings about the relative sizes so well and the starkness of the sea. I like the hues and textures and the way you have compsoed the shot

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• emes (304)
• [2008-07-19 4:39]
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• jimkilgallon (1539)
• [2008-07-19 4:43]

Hello Jonas
Ample space with the boat positioned well in the bottom left. Very good ripple formations in the water and natural water colours. Very good Jonas.
Regards
Jim

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• GLEM (2790)
• [2008-07-19 5:06]

salut Jonas
originale prise de vue, un vrai tableau de maître. C'est sobre, artistique et coloré.
bravo

gl

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• ilvao (1077)
• [2008-07-19 5:06]

Hi Jonas,
Simple but wonderful
great idea
super choice of cropping
all the best
olivier

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• Floydian (25559)
• [2008-07-19 12:10]

Hallo Jonas,
Boy you have really a great eye in seeing things and the way how to capture them. This is so simple, but so clever composed, i really like it. The lonely boat on the water with the small waves all over the lake is just wonderful.
Not bad for a Nikon ;-)
Regards, Henk

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• danyy (52803)
• [2008-07-19 14:52]

Bien vu Jonas,
le graphisme formé par toutes les ondulations sur la surface, le bateau est bien placé, du champs lui est donné pour voir vers où il va.
Excellent POV en altitude.
Un tout bon dimanche.
Daniel.

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• Waylim (3388)
• [2008-07-19 22:19]

Very simple but nice, Great texture of the water, love the pattern of the lake as the wind swept and boat leave behind the trails. As much as I love the scene of the water, I think it could use a little closer up shoot. just a little bit too much empty space. Though I do like the way it show the scale of this lake. thanks
Way

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• mark_mk (2262)
• [2008-07-20 6:07]

Hi Jonas,
super Komposition, einfach, aber sehr gut! Das einzelne Boot und das viele Wasser drum rum, klasse! Farben sind super und dein Blickwinkel aus der Vogelperspektive natürlich! Sehr gut, gefällt mir echt gut!

Beste Grüße
Mark

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• riclopes (27056)
• [2008-07-20 9:36]

Olá Jonas, wonderful minimalist composition with lovely textures on the water and natural colors. Yes, less is more, so 1 is problably better than 5. Still, I would like to see the boat to stand out more...don't know exactely how. Anyway, you had a smart idea and this is a lovely image.
ricardo

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• gracious (12936)
• [2008-07-20 12:27]

Hello Jonas,
Good placement of the boat in the image with beautiful blue lake water! if you can have the horizon of the lake will be even better for this sort of composition if not it will be a bit blank in this subject, just a sincere thought and hope you do not mind!
best regards
Tony

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• John_F_Kennedy (21108)
• [2008-07-20 23:23]

Exzellente Perspektive. Die Wellenbewegungen alleine sind schon gut gelungen, dein Blick für das Boot ist einfach sehr gut.
Viele Grüße,
Achim

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• jhm (68088)
• [2008-07-21 0:28]

Hello my friend Jonas,

Perhaps a few people would dare for this picture to making, it's simple, but formidable seen!
The moving in water with the small waves and than the boat under in the corner, my compliments my friend.
Very well done, TFS.

Have a nice day,
John.

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• JCG (17060)
• [2008-07-21 0:35]

Hi Jonas,

A very simple photograph with a very good framing on the oar which seems lost in this lake. I like the graphic side of the image with all these undulations on water surface. Well seen and well done Jonas, cheer.

With all my friendships and a very good week,

Jean-Charles

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• stego (15398)
• [2008-07-21 12:10]

Hallo Jonas,
Wow! It's fabulous!
I adore the minimalism in it. The high POV is stunning and so is the texture on the water that "fills" the image despite its actual "emptiness". I really don't see what can be improved here.
Bravo!
Regards, José.

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• anducina (7275)
• [2008-07-21 12:45]

Excellent minimalist compo, I like the beautiful blue and the texture of the water. The colorful boat is a good focal point.

TFS,
Andreea

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• leo61 (32126)
• [2008-07-21 13:15]

Hallo Jonas!
Gute Entscheidung dieses Bild zu präsentieren .Mir gefällt das minimalistische.Die Linien und Ratuen auf dem See sind ein schöner graphischer Effekt und das Boot ist gut platziert.
Gru,Leo

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• feather (40653)
• [2008-07-22 12:45]

It's quite a daring and creative minimalist composition. The texture caused by the ripples of the water are what makes it a success. Personally I wouldn't have placed the boat so tighly in the corner. Roughly the same place but with a bit more water around it. It seems the others like it where it is so I am out-numbered. :)
Kath

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• zeynepe (4596)
• [2008-07-23 3:17]

Hello Jonas,
What a simple and beautiful combination.
You captured a perfect POV of the lines of the sea and the boat .
Congrats and have a nice day,
zeynep

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• toto (14253)
• [2008-07-23 4:18]

Bonjours,
belle photo de cette immensité d' eau sur laquelle cette frèle esquisse se déplace.
Jolies couleurs et bonne netteté.
Un peut comme mes balons dans le ciel, le risque est grand de ne pas avoir d' amateur, mais non, les gens ont l' air d' aprécier ce genre de prise.
Ces quelques lignes, ondées sur cette eau donne de la vie a votre prise.

Amitiés Thomas

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• baba_flies (4659)
• [2008-07-23 7:44]

Hallo Jonas! Exzellentes "fast gar nichts", und wenn man nicht genau hinschaut, dann koennte es auch nur Wasser sein. Ich finde die Wahl richtig gut, dass das Boot ganz weit unten ist, das tut dem Auge gut und ist richtig harmonisch. Tolle Arbeit, und geht gleich in meine "Favoritenbox" ... Gruss aus Zuerich, Barbara.

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• Tue (23893)
• [2008-07-23 13:38]

Hi Jonas,
Superb photo, a very simple composition, but it is so strong and works so well. A beautiful pattern on the water thanks to the many small waves. The single boat is really well included in the bottom left hand corner and the light was also pleasant. Thanks a lot for sharing!
Regards,
Lars

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• luiscar (3253)
• [2008-07-24 12:24]

Hi Jonas
what such a friend?. I see that, you continue like always, (they cheat big photography), your gallery is already powerful.

this image is artistic completely, I POV pleases-, I believe that it is thin and elegant.

for of last month, the definition, color and the enmarcacion, they do of her a photo of success.

big work

greetings

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• pablominto (30449)
• [2008-07-27 9:01]

Hello Jonas,

Seems like the team is practicing the eight, maybe preparing for the upcoming Olympics, hehehe!
Interesting minimalism, seen from an amazing point of view...

Greetings,
Pablo -

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• Sistercosmo (441)
• [2008-07-31 11:32]

Hi Jonas,
I really like this composition and the fact that you decided to go minimalistic. I think that makes the photo special. Very artistic! Colorful, sharp and simply well-done!
See ya,
Linda

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• Angshu (25492)
• [2008-07-31 20:42]

Hello Jonas
You had taken a wise decision here. The minimalist compo. works really well. We do see a couple of wakes of water left behind by canoes. The cross ripples of the water makes it even more attractive. I might have wished the canoe to be little bit higher, roughly at thirds of the frame height, as an option. But as it is this is an excellent shot!
Best Regards
Angshu