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Smile at the Sky

Smile at the sky
It’s so pretty
It sets me free
When I’m sad
I go outside
When I’m happy
I go outside
A smile emerges on my face
So far and wide
Just like the sky
The smiling sky whom I smile back to
Smile at the sky

Are you happy?
You’re already outside and smiling
Are you sad?
Get your ass outside and show the sky a smile
Smile at the sky
Smile at the sky
And give him a grin or two
Remember he loves you too
Smile at the sky
Smile at the sky

pierre singla

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DannyJ (278) 2009-02-01 19:07

A nice shot, although given the more abstract composition, I think cropping it down to just one bird would balance the shot better. Alternatively, it could be cropped so that each bird occupies a corner of the picture. This picture makes me think of Modugno's operatic piece, Volare. All in all, a very good representation of the idea of freedom. Great work!

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claudees (490) 2009-02-02 1:06 [Comment]