Ferry kid II Photo

Photographer’s Note

I promised i would come back with more pics of this kid... i command the workshop and tip from Curtis (Cgrindhal) to crop closer... i post the original as a ws and this is my cropped version.. It does indeed improve the final result..thanks for reminding me and help me improve...;-)

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Galeota (10334) 2004-07-22 4:29

Très bonne idée de rogner la photo originale. Je trouve le flou intéressant.

pridel (233) 2004-07-22 4:44

Très bon le recadrage. j'aime beaucoup le flou qui compose bien avec l'inclinaison. La lumière derrière le garçon lui donne de la force, dans le sens où il crève l'écran. j'aime beaucoup.

Burnham (2426) 2004-07-22 7:43

Now his mom's gone and he seems to be looking for her ;o) I like you cropping today, but I also thought it was great yesterday, even bofore Curtis' WS. This is abit soft, but it doesn't appear so on the original, guess it's the compression or something. Lovely kid.

Rinie_Hoff (9334) 2004-07-22 17:26

Hi Eric, I like it, you listened well, I think Curtis was right, and before him, Manny of course. You played nicely with the picture. I had to rotate it for myself before I could believ it was the same picture.
But you lost some sharpness, I think

cgrindahl (6109) 2004-07-23 3:34

These shots are really fine Eric. I think we should tip our hat to Manny, Claude and Maciek, however, the folks who give us all lessons in composing portrait shots. I'm just learning like the rest of us. I agree with Line that this is a bit soft, which to my eye keeps it from the realm of perfection. It is very nice, nonetheless.

zto (292) 2004-07-24 5:35