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Copyright: amos na (anadai) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 81 W: 0 N: 52] (2385)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-03-24
Categories: Architecture
Camera: Nikon D 70s, Nikon 18-200mm f/3.5-5.6 G ED-IF AF-S V
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2006-03-29 12:28
Viewed: 642
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
There is this gate that looks as a keyhole at the cathedral of Sevilla, on the gate there is a door and on the door there is a keyhole...
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Bonsoir Amos,

Jolie composition de ces deux photos, j'aime particulièrement celle où l'on aperçois à travers la serrure la verdure qui se cache derrière ! Belle idée que de zoomer sur un détail de la première photo. Bravo !

Regards,
Stéphanie.

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  • berek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3876 W: 172 N: 4900] (22175)
  • [2006-03-29 14:46]

Hello Amos,
this is very interesting working. I like it. very good idea for take a picture. good composition and color management. Congratulation.
good evening.
B.Erek
Meaning ( Sense ) 9,Framing:10,Idea :10

it took me a minute to figure out what was going on here. I think that it is a good idea and well represented repition of forms in your diptic here.

I think the confusing part for me was the frame. THe frame is was not readily understood as a frame. I think that a black frame might have worked better. I did a w/s to see if you like it. I think it focuses more of the attention at the subject and does not confuse anything.

thanks
b

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