Urban life

Critiques [Translate]

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• sencer (236)
• [2006-03-21 16:45]

Hi Jose,
Firstly, welcome to TE. It is a nice photo but i wish you couldn't cut his arm and maybe plastic bottle in your view. It is great for the beginning. Moreover, it is nice effect for the wall as if it has a slope. Congrats...

SMD

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• triptych2003 (1354)
• [2006-03-21 19:03]

i agree that the arm and bottle should be cropped. but other than that, the framing is very nice. well done

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• vagabondtravels (5898)
• [2006-03-21 20:52]

Welcome to TE. Very sharp image. I would agree about cropping out the bottle. I look forward to seeing more from you.

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• lukas (1986)
• [2006-03-22 5:25]

Hi Jose Manuel
I like this subject and picture, good choise of B&W and POV, shows the run and rush of the city. It seems hot and thirsty. Well done.
Luc

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• kajspice (4499)
• [2006-03-25 9:16]
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Excellent introduction...very honest and sweet Jose...

I am sure you will become a valued member of the TE community...

Now, back to your photo...I love this kind of photography. Well caught and the man is well positioned.

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• dcawker (4985)
• [2006-03-29 10:31]

I enjoy the off-balance feel of the subject to one side.. nice urban capture here! Regards, Doug

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• just4iris (792)
• [2006-03-29 13:09]

Ola Jose and welcome to TE!
Beautiful moment of a daily life and good choice to B&W work.
daniela

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• zig (2410)
• [2006-04-02 8:48]
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Hi Jose.
I like this kind of photo. A shot off from the street always temptate me. This could have been better with more contrasts. Good composition and works well in B&W. It is a bit disapointment to me that you cropped the tip of water bottle and you didn't spot well what is writen in the wall. I just wanted to see the complete/part of graffiti in the wall.

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• rushandy (196)
• [2006-04-06 7:35]

Hi Jose,

Great photo. I like the inclusion of the arm and the bottle. Black and white was a good choice here.

Well done.