Another Romanic Church Photo

Photographer’s Note

Galicia - La Coruna - Santiago de Compostela.
New arquitecture vs old arquitecture.
A photo contrasting a recent built plaza with the caracteristic monument of the city.
Intention: perspective on on side framed by tall volumes in the back; not such a beautiful day - it was cloudy - but great ligth thou.

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AthaPan (0) 2006-06-14 11:26

Hi Rita

Please do me a small favour.
As this is a big community from each part of this world, write a small note to your photos... :-)

Now to your photo.
It is fine, but it needs some improvements.

Let me share my opinions with you:
1) Your sky is burned out, try to avoid this
2) the pov is fine, but not fine enough; I guess taking this photo directly in front of this church would on the one hand be better but unfortunately on the other hand it would loose this heading lines...

Anyway, good start and keep it going.

Speak to you
Sakis

I did a small ws, but I am not really satisfied, as it is too artificial and I can not "recover" the pov as I would like to.

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Naiini (147) 2006-06-14 18:53

"Firmitas" in action. I like the way you captured the austerity of the place.

Didi (36442) 2006-06-15 12:13

Bonjour Rita
Intéressante composition entre deux architectures différentes.
Le POV est bien choisi.
Cependant l'écart de luminosité est trop fort entre le ciel et l'édifice, cela a donné un ciel laiteux, c'est normal.
Voir WS.
Merci.

Bom-dia Rita
Interessante composição entre duas arquitecturas diferentes. O POV é escolhido bem. Contudo o desvio de luminosidade é demasiado forte entre o céu e o edifício, aquilo deu um céu leitoso, é normal. Ver WS. Obrigado.

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