As time goes by

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• picus (779)
• [2008-01-10 10:48]

Hello Mirari,

as I can see, we came to the same conclusion concerning the point system!

I like this shot a lot, although I'd give it a try to see how it would come out when aligning the table to the ground lines: It would probably get more abstract, but loose the dynamic that comes from the moving people and the lady...

Cheers,
Pascal

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• Roelena (155)
• [2008-01-10 10:50]

hello Mirari!

i must say I found your photo very interesting, a very good composition considering the meaning of the elements, the technique used, the title and the note, all to illustrate the time. An old woman thinking, on a bench, some young legs in hurry, and the reflection of the windows, all in black&white.
TFS,
Elena

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• coco (22971)
• [2008-01-10 14:25]

Hola Mirari.

Veo que has visitado una de mis ciudades favoritas.
El blanco y negro resulta muy sugerente y también el uso de los reflejos.

Buena composición y un trabajo a tener en cuenta.

Carlos.

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• Truja (4934)
• [2008-01-11 3:10]

Bones Mirari, has creado una gran atmósfera introspectiva e intimista gracias al uso del B&N, a los brillantes reflejos y gracias a Jorge Luis Borges. Gran creación artística Mirari!!
Además, el gesto pensativo de la señora sentada ayuda más a crear este ambiente de gris soledad-solitud.
Gran trabajo.

Salut y un abrazo, Jordi

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• Anna-- (4523)
• [2008-01-11 10:13]

Ciao Mirari,
interesting reflections in a beautiful composition. Excellent B&W image. Great graphic effect
Anna

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• aral (1089)
• [2008-01-13 12:33]

Hi Mirari,

I like fresh ideas like this. Fine idea to include two pairs of legs. I would only wish a bit more local contrast, but that's nit picking. Excellent job.

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• smarcell (7767)
• [2008-01-13 13:08]

Anche questa e' veramente molto interessante, Una bella composizione.
ciao Stefano

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• mpdre (1383)
• [2008-01-13 16:21]

Hi Miraer.
Very symbolic and beautiful scene. The three elements in the image, the old lady thinking, the reflexion of the building on the marble and the pair of legs moving away, all create an interesting feeling of time passing by... The poem of Borges links very well with the picture. Congratulations.
Andre

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• prises2vues (219)
• [2008-01-16 1:48]

Image surprenante et très originale, qui évoque bien en effet l'univers de Borges que tu cites. C'est vraiment très beau, bravo!

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• kiks (3435)
• [2008-01-16 8:39]

Hi Mirari, perfect titel for this image. The composition with the old womann with the reflection besides her and the feet of the 2 people passing by make it complete.
Very original and well composed. B&W is perfect for this composition.
Congratulations and TFS
KIks

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• marietom (18400)
• [2008-01-21 1:46]

Hi Mirari,

Une image originale, je me demande ce qu'elle aurait donné en couleurs, avec un sol un peu humide...
Bien vu.
Marie

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• quillo (4948)
• [2008-01-24 10:50]

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Hola Mirari, una buena composición con un resultado muy interesante. . . .
el encuadre, la definición, los contrastes, los reflejos en el mármol....
hacen de tu foto un excelente trabajo.

Felicidades amigo.

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