This photo it's a tribute to ours friend Yitzhak . He like "industry photo" and today i go out and try to take a Yitzhak view. In PP work, i incrise contrast and desature yellow and green channel.
I hope you like.
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Kenny10pin (19301) 2004-08-09 11:09
nice image here, very concrete textures, seems unreal, but very nice, the details are good and the lampost here gives us the sense of height, well done
carper (96) 2004-08-09 11:16
Very good tribute Rafael,
Great lines in the good composition, with very good colours, Well I like it, very good job
jhm (146570) 2004-08-09 12:29
A lovely tribute to Yitzhak, but your photo is very sharp, excellently architectonic front, good composition Rafael, well seen!
nwoehnl (122) 2004-08-09 12:52
Good tribute, Rafa, I'm sure Yitzhak will like it. Good play of lines enhanced by your cropping, and fine placement of these different textures relative to each other. The partial desaturation works out just fine. Well done.
Hanssie (10465) 2004-08-09 13:21
Very, very "Avigurish", Rafael, nice idea !
And different from you, but it is artistic and I think, Yitzhak will like it, just something for him !
avigur_11 (22087) 2004-08-09 16:48
Thanks a lot, Rafa, this is really a nice surprise to find my name in your title of this well composed photo.
The roughness of the wall with the smooth oprange edges make a very nice contrast, and your point of view is excellent. You did a very good PP work, and a very good composition of an industrial subject, just the way I like. Excellnet work, and thanks, again.
pridel (233) 2004-08-09 17:21
Rafael ! C'est très novateur ! j'aime beaucoup cette photo pour les couleurs vives et le rendu imppécable. Le côté abstrait de la composition me plaît aussi, même si j'aurais coupé verticalement à l'angle du mur et du ciel (1/3) on garde une bande blanche du mur indispensable mais on limite la garnde masse du mur.
Beau travail tout de même
pamastro (7290) 2004-08-10 1:43
Excellent colors. Very nice lines. The textures of the concrete are very strong and I can almost feel them. Interesting object. I'm just curious about what this is, exactly. But it seems to have been very well seen and photographed. Nicely done.
timotey (119) 2004-08-10 2:50
Beautiful composition mixing various tones and thus increasing the shape of this building. The street light give a good scale ratio to improve greatness of this wall. Its texture is very well rendered by a ambient light angle very well choosen.
elihesamian (26149) 2004-08-10 4:12
Nice tribute,Well done for this freindly work,Rafael!
A strong point here is cropping that you did very well,and great playing with lines,Excellent,very fine seen & composed,I like it.and sure that our dear friend "Yitzhak" will like it.
Thanks for posted it.
jhonny_blue (4956) 2004-08-10 5:05
Belo tributo ao nosso amigo Avigur.
Gosto muito da composição e das cores.
ChrisJ (107083) 2004-08-10 5:29
Nice thought. Image is pretty good too.
yweinreich (165) 2004-08-10 12:26
nice shot.. crisp lines.. very structural..
Isabelle (9046) 2004-08-10 17:46
linda foto, Rafa, bem ao estilo do Yitzhak!
acredito mesmo que ela funcionaria muito bem em p&b também.
as diagonais estão incríveis e também as várias texturas estão bem mostradas aqui!
belo trabalho, linda homenagem.
joseelias (0) 2004-08-11 8:19
Boa foto de arquitectura. Gosto bastante de como as várias linhas rectas se cruzam em diferentes angulos. As cores são excelentes bem como o controlo da exposição e os contrastes. Excelentwe enquadramento.
femkevdh (2633) 2004-08-16 3:46
great one! Indeed a bit 'Yitzhak-style'. Great contrasting colours and perfect compo and framing!
- Copyright: Rafael Almeida (summer89) (5422)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2004-08-09
- Categories: Architecture
- Camera: Canon PowerShot A80, Canon Built in Lens
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Theme(s): Tributes to TE members [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2004-08-09 10:47