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Facing the Sea


Facing the Sea
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Copyright: Paulo Silva (paulosilva) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 18 W: 0 N: 49] (200)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2003-07-05
Categories: Architecture
Exposure: f/7.8
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-05-08 6:36
Viewed: 528
Points: 6
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This photo was taken in 2003 when I was leaving the sea after a diving session in Alportuche, Arrabida.

The camera was still in its water protective box but I felt quite interesting this lonely little house facing the sea.

The wire in the sky and the black piece of plastic on the right corner (below) aren´t nice :(

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  • Guima Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 123 W: 0 N: 13] (134)
  • [2006-05-08 6:42]
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Olá Paulo!
Benvindo ao TE. Gostei da sua foto com boas cores. no entanto desde já lhe digo que deve tanto quanto possivel "enquadrar" a foto com ujm bom comentário. Tente descrever o local, o porquê da foto, a intenção,etc. tudo aquilo que possam ser ajudas á interpretação do trabalho.
Continue fotografando!
Ricardo Teixeira

Lugar encantador e único. Gostei da nota, precisando o local Alportuche, Arrabida.

Hi Paulo,
You can't have everything, at least I am certain you could not remove that overhead wire or cable :o) I like it very much in spite of this wire and a plastic bag (which actually looks like a black stone - if you did not draw my attention I could have never noticed there is sth wrong); what I WOULD change is a general composition - by reducing a stony zone and adding some more sky - the hut would be somewhere closer to the photo horizontal axis (now it's too high); waiting for next photos - wherever you dive!!! Tom

Bonita composição muito bem elaborada e enquadrada.
Cores e definição excelentes.
Abraços Paulo.

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  • xuaxo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2617 W: 179 N: 2433] (4089)
  • [2006-06-19 3:52]

Olá Paulo,
Não concordo com o Tom (fotomek). Acho que estas pedras e areia em primeiro plano acabam por colocar a casinha na sua real (diminuta) dimensão e localização. Acho é que a foto está um pouco inclinada para a esquerda.
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Grande ideia teres posto o rapaz (Diogo) a tirar fotografias e a apresentá-las em público. Acho que vou fazer o mesmo com os meus, pelo menos o mais velho (7 anos).

Um abraço
Francisco
>> Meu sistema de pontos está desligado; ver detalhes no perfil/intro.

This is one of those magical places, that makes you go back to your youth. So many incredible dives that we finished on this beach shore.

All these places are now part of natural reservation, and off limits for the most activities that you can think of. Diving is not allowed any more... What a shame...!

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