The lagoon of Fabrica I

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• emilbo (6335)
• [2006-12-19 22:51]

Ola Jose!
Belle prise de vue et bonne composition. J'aime beaucoup les herbes en avant-plan et le bateau. Il semble avoir une belle plage de l'autre côté de la lagune.
Félicitations!
Emilius

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• ribeiroantonio (15514)
• [2006-12-19 23:36]

Não está nada mal. Talvez um pouco centrada mas sem importância para o aspecto geral da imagem. As cores óptimas e a definição muito boa. Valeu a pena a "avaria".
António

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• UnTrained (13470)
• [2006-12-20 3:21]

Olá José,
nice story about occasions of capturing. The composition with the boat and the green is nice. It is a very deep view we get to see a bit more than colorpoints on these island. It looks more than a place of the Mediterranean, because of the missing waves and motion. The colors are good and natural, like such a place in the sun. I would have cropped a bit the sky, I think above the cloud on the left.
Cheers, Ulf

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• sufi (9468)
• [2006-12-20 6:22]

Merhaba Jose...
It's a wonderful composition... The point of view and the perspective are wonderful too... The colors, the contrast between the blue and the tones of the yellow, the light and the details are perfect...
TFS...
Stay well..
Salim.

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• Wanda1 (8329)
• [2006-12-20 11:45]

Hi Jose,
This is a nice clear shot of this beach scene. I like the colours and the way you have chosen to compose the shot with the boats off centre, and the grass in the foreground.
Regards
Wanda

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• feather (40653)
• [2006-12-20 12:26]

Very unusual picture. We don't normally expect to see the beach at the other side of the sea. There are so many horizontal layers from the foreground grass to the unexpected beach in the background, giving the image great depth. I like the way our eye hops diagonally from right to left going into the image to the back.
Kath

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• sothy81 (8040)
• [2006-12-20 12:49]

Hi Jose, this is a nice view of the beach. Very detailed. Also the colors are great. Very clear too. Sothy

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• bostankorkulugu (25547)
• [2006-12-20 12:57]

i like the parallel lines of the sand streches... the blue boat is just at the right spot... congrats jose...
korkut

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• parbo (6854)
• [2006-12-20 21:08]

Olá Jose,

I laugh a lot after reading your story. But the result is excellent. I like horizontally divided parts to much and the lovely boat at front. Colors and sky are beautifully captured. Congratulations.

I would like to wish to you and your family a joyful and peaceful holiday season, and a prosperous New Year.

Friendly Regards,

Ertugrul

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• sarahnatalie (648)
• [2006-12-20 21:32]

Hi Jose,
Great story and great photo. The strong light works well here I think. Fascinating looking place. It looked somewhat dull when I saw the thumbnail, but when I opened it up I was very pleasantly surprised! Good Job.
Sarah

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• Benedict (6387)
• [2006-12-21 0:52]

hi jose,
one of the best fotos you have uploaded! pastel-like colors, so eye pleasing. the colored boat captured off-center is "on the right place". informative notes, as well!
benedict

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• Donald (132)
• [2006-12-21 3:28]

Hi jose yes Cars just when you need them most they let you down! and phones thats the same I always find that I can always be in the only place with no coverage in a glen with a 3 mile walk to get a signal, but at least you had a nice place to take a photo and a good one at that! nice looking place for a swim.
regards
Donald

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• MIG13 (0)
• [2006-12-21 9:05]

Bonita composição, José, de cores bem definidas e excelente sucessão de planos, desde a vegetação rasteira à frente até a praia e seus banhistas ao fundo. Bom trabalho, amigo! Abraço! Miguel.

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• cuneyt-sb (6946)
• [2006-12-21 17:36]

Hi Jose
its very good compo and very good POV scene
sorry for being late i was bussy
thanks for share
regards

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• Malyshev (2545)
• [2006-12-28 15:54]

Great shot,Jose!
Wonderful lines and soft colours! I like this picture and atmosphere!
Regards!
yuri

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• balatrek (7312)
• [2006-12-31 4:33]

Hola Jose,

Una composición sencilla pero de gran belleza, me gusta la posición de la barca y el primer plano del arbusto, lastima que no hubiese nubes, eso ayudaría a esta imagen, de todas formas un buen trabajo, gracia por compartirlo.

Saludos y Feliz Año Nuevo

José

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• pboehringer (19330)
• [2007-01-08 15:50]
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A big hurrah for the bug in the anti-theft software, Jose, otherwise we wouldn't be able to have this shot at TE! The motorboats on the rigth are a little bit busy. I did a WS to show what I mean. I hope you approve it.
Regards, Peter

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• paura (23240)
• [2007-04-30 20:28]
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José,
Não conhecia essa bela composição. Incrível como você conseguiu agrupar tanta coisa bonita em um único quadro. Para ficar ainda melhor, penso que se tivesse deixado a mostra os barcos da esquerda da foto, terias conseguido.

Paulo

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• xuaxo (4089)
• [2007-07-02 5:29]

Olá José,
Prefiro as cores e o aspecto mais "vazio" e mais simples de "The lagoon of Fabrica II".
Aqui perde-mo-nos um pouco mais entre as ervas do primeiro plano, o barco e a praia ao fundo.
Um abraço,
F

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• jusninasirun (6989)
• [2007-11-28 3:58]

Hello Jose,
You have suprb collection of pictures. This one is so cleverly composed with different horizontal layers because of the lagoon - making this original shot unique.
Very well done and best regards.
Jusni

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• ekinokswest (2625)
• [2007-12-22 7:24]

Dear jose
I often used to worry about my photos that they lack a desired sky view but this is common in many photographs, so that s happy to notice about me. depending on the day, the sky may not offer that much to a photographer while we can focus on other details surely.
your photo is simple but beautiful. seeing part of mud and beautiful sea is great. and about your adventure, sometimes the moments you feel you are unlucky can turn out to be good moments like this