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Yellow carpet


Yellow carpet
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Copyright: Aleksander Gruszecki (Graal) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4605 W: 119 N: 429] (40469)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-05-08
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon D70s, Tamron 17-50mm f2.8, HOYA 67mm HMC SUPER UV(0)
Exposure: f/8, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Date Submitted: 2008-05-12 6:14
Viewed: 356
Points: 57
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Spring in the park near my home.
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See 2nd sight in WS.
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Loely colours and textures and a great perspective which superbly brings out the depth. I like the composition and the mood. nice work again.

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  • Paolo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4701 W: 146 N: 9001] (39569)
  • [2008-05-12 6:26]

As in a paint Aleksander! colorful, strong contrast and sharp, excellent light and a great POV.
thanks, ciao

hİ ALEKSANDER ;

çok güzel renkler ve kadraj derinlik hisside harika elinize sağlık

Önder kahraman

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  • Gustaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2242 W: 690 N: 178] (18460)
  • [2008-05-12 8:59]

Żółty dywan mówisz... Ciekawie. Kolorki bardzo piękne. Aż zrobiło mi się cieplej od samego patrzenia. Ale czy nie za dużo ostrości?
Pozdrowionka.
Marek

bonjour,
il y a des champs de colza et lŕ des champs de pissenlits, le jaune prime en ce moment sur TE, un site d'une belle nature avec cet arbre fleuri et l'eau qui coule ŕ travers la gondole
excellente composition
juliette

Hej Alek!

Przyjemne otoczenie masz kolo domu , tylko pozazdroscic . Swietne kolory !
Pozdrawiam
Artur

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  • Fis2 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2341 W: 137 N: 1352] (30848)
  • [2008-05-12 13:27]
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Witaj Olku!
Piękna majówka, kolorowo i słonecznie. ŁAdny kadr i kompozycja. Ale ja bym wolał delikatniej nie tak ostro ;).
Pozdrawiam
Krzysztof

I think this composition works the best for the diagonal of the stream, which leads the eye nicely into the frame. I like the splash of pink from the blossom tree amid all the green and yellow. I am wondering if you had to use high compression as all the tiny details take a lot of memory and the square format has resulted in a larger area too. Having to use high compression for TE often makes the image appear to be over-sharpened when it is not the case.
Kath

Witaj!
Fantastyczny widoczek,super kolory i dobra ostrość.Miło odpoczywać w tak cudownym otoczeniu.
Pozdrawiam
Tadeusz

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1418 W: 32 N: 570] (8216)
  • [2008-05-12 16:43]

This is very beautiful!! Superb colors and pov. I love this creek running through the park. Beautiful flowers! TFS

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  • emka Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 378 W: 17 N: 903] (6585)
  • [2008-05-13 1:05]

witaj Alek,
Ale żółta łaka. To wszystko mlecze? Tak wygląda. fajny kadr, fajne kolorki. Ale zawsze mam w takiej sytuacji problem z ostrością. Jak się chce pokazać te drobne szczególiki, to wygląda na przeostrzone. Ale ten dywan imponujące i piekny, choć to pospolite chwasty. Pozdrawiam serdecznie

Małgorzata

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  • vincz Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2999 W: 87 N: 5049] (17510)
  • [2008-05-13 1:16]

Fascinating dotted feeling with all these flowers all over the place. I like the small canal on an oblique. A very nice one.

Dzień dobry Aleksander,
Amazing shot for this place with rich and spectacular colours. The composition is very fine and the atmosphere is peaceful and soothing. Beautiful work, Very well done! Have a nice day
George

What a power of nature !!! I liked the lighting, colour and composition of this shot very much.
Best wishes,
Achim

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  • Cricri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4185 W: 226 N: 5635] (27404)
  • [2008-05-13 7:29]

Hi Aleksander,
Une image ou le jaune et le vert prime les arbres et les quelques touches de bleu ajoute agréablement a la composition, Beau cadrage avec le reflet dans l'allée d'eau
Have a nice day for you
cricri

Hello Aleksander,
the red tree is noticed of course, as you wanted, I suppose. Excel framing on these flowers, a good square format to put all this vegetation. A pleasant work.
Have a nice day
Cordially
Joël

Aleksander,
Great spring carpet here !
Youc omposed it in the right way, with very good use too of the perspective.
Regards,
JB.

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  • azaf1 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1436 W: 118 N: 1854] (8767)
  • [2008-05-14 1:49]

Aleksander good morning
A great Ode to Spring. Those yellow flowers are a pleasure to look at. The small creek and the purple splash of color all together compose a visual pleasure
TFS
Argiris

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  • carper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 9292 W: 445 N: 14616] (51323)
  • [2008-05-14 2:54]

marvelous one aleksander,
a fantastic format, good perspective and a very nice spring composition, very good quality here, well done, have a nice evening.
gr. jaap

Hi Aleksander
Nice Yellow carpet in this beautiful spring composition. I like the reflections on the water and how you framed it. Great contrast between colours
Warm greetings
Aires

witaj Aleksander
piękne kolory i super kadr,dobra ostrość fajna fotka
pozdrawiam dario

Hi Aleksander,

A beautiful overwhelming green scene. The green overtone is excellent reinforced by the yellow dandelions and pink blossoms.

Groet Rob

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  • Tue Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5104 W: 56 N: 7191] (23023)
  • [2008-05-14 15:42]

Hi Aleksander,
Lovely capture of spring, the atmosphere is really very nice here. I love all the colours of the flowers and trees, which are also so nicely enhanced by the light. The little bit of water is well included in the foreground. Thanks for sharing!
Regards,
Lars

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  • mikeo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1044 W: 91 N: 1034] (7367)
  • [2008-05-15 0:49]

Czesc,

Ostre w cholere, ale chyba troche za... Az krawedzie powylazily, przez to troche sie zaczyna zlewac. Ale i tak ladna praca, te wszystkie kwiatki, kolorki, zapaszki, rzeczka - wszystko super wyglada...

pozdro,

mikeo

another beautifful spring shot on TE... the little stream has the leading role here... a vertical framing rather than a square, excluding the cars could work well also but still a very nice one aleksander...

all the best

korkut

salut alek
une photo bien colorée avec tout ce parterre de fleurs jaune, belle perspective de cette rigole qui coupe le cadrage
amitiés
gilbert

Hello Aleksander,

Jolie composition carrée, avec de magnifiques couleurs. Tout le charme du printemps dans cette image.
Bonne journée
Marie

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  • mumek Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2179 W: 27 N: 2249] (15261)
  • [2008-05-20 3:07]

Dzien dobry Al!
Pieknie pokazana wiosna.Cudowny dywan mleczow,wspaniale rozne odcieni zieleni, kwitnace drzewko, i ten strumyk plynacy w parku. Artystyczna widokowka z Elblaga. Gratuluje
pozdrawiam serdecznie
ziggy

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  • Angshu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4763 W: 166 N: 7278] (23668)
  • [2008-05-22 0:28]

Hello Aleks
What a wonderful palette of colours you show here...the yellow flowers amidst the green carpet, the splash of red & the canal water reflecting the blue of the sky. Lovely perspective & depth. Good work!
Regards
Angshu

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