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Other side of light


Other side of light
Photo Information
Copyright: Jan jasmis (jasmis) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2903 W: 618 N: 3152] (38067)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-05-12
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon G7
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/8 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-05-21 18:28
Viewed: 324
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 42
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Light... Even if we don't want it, it flows through all curtains.
But could we live without the light?
So... let it be light!
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Hi,Jan!
It's a pity the rules of TE don't allow to write just one word!
Your pic is really amazing! It's a good metaphor of the eternal struggle of good and evil. I assume, good is the winner, right?
TFS
Good luck and good shots!
Valerka:)

Beautiful dark image with excellent idea and composition, well done Jan, perfect B&W with all its appeal.
Ciao
Vinicio

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  • bibik Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 200 W: 30 N: 14] (2770)
  • [2007-05-22 5:02]

I am afraid this photo is too symbolic, too simple, but... This is really strong message included in. No many smiles, I presume...
For me - real gem.
Regards.

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  • Fis2 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2436 W: 140 N: 1407] (32209)
  • [2007-05-22 6:06]

Witaj Janek!
Wyglądasz ze stodoły, dobry pomysł. Wracają wspomnienia kiedy się wyglądało przez takie wrota ;-). To były klimaty. Dobry pomysł, ciekawe światło.
Pozdrawiam
Krzysztof

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  • jlynx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 659 W: 75 N: 771] (9360)
  • [2007-05-22 7:07]

Witaj Janku,
Są tacy, którzy mieli okazję widzieć tę drugą stronę światła w takiej scenerii. No bo ilu miało okazję, a ilu pamięta stare stodoły pachnace sianem i zbożem? Któż widzaił, albo kto pamięta ostre smugi światła tnące mrok tego tajemniczego schronienia dla tysięcy zadowolonych myszy. Powoli znikają te zacne budowle nikomu nie potrzebne, zabierające cenne skrawki tak dobrze sprzedajacej się ziemi pozostawiając nielicznym szczęśliwcom wspaniałe i bogate wspomnienia. I pomysleć, że tych kilka świetlistych szczelin tak bardzo poruszyło moją wyobraźnią... Bardzo dobry pomysł i cenna oszczędność w wyrazie.
Pozdrawiam serdecznie,
Jurek

Hi Jan,

overexposed area makes your photo amazing! Very smart idea and creative composition. congratulations.
hakan

Witaj Janku,
niesamowite zdjecie, niepowtarzalna atmosfera i swietnie dobrany tytul... ciekawa praca, sklaniajaca do chwili releksji i wspomnien...
Pozdrawiam,
Andrzej

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  • berek Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3965 W: 173 N: 4995] (22758)
  • [2007-05-22 11:47]

Witaj Jan,
this is creative work. i like lights and idea. havea nice day.
Burak

Hi Jan,
Original idea and interesting result, these contrast between shades and light gives an impressive effect.

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  • ninaL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1783 W: 232 N: 1872] (15607)
  • [2007-05-22 12:54]

Jak na "zabawe na TE", no to fajne jest.
Swiatlo ostro rznie przez plot, nawet troche go podjada.
Pozdrawiam. Grazyna.

You're becoming more and more creative, letting your imagination go wild, Jan. I guess that there are no rules for you, lately. Each day is a new day and we'll see what comes up :) Very well succeeded work, with a nice poetic input. The strong contrasts, usual from you, are very effective here.
Ricardo

Jan,
These contrasts are just wonderful.
I like your choice to overexpose the bright parts.
Ground texture is nice too.
Regards,
JB.

Hello Jan,
once again you push the limits of creativity beyond with this one. Normally we would say that the light coming thru the little spaces and door is over exposed but on this one it's that fact that makes the photo special. This fact along with your short but meaningful note makes this photo special and with a special meaning.
This is one of the characteristic of your work that I like the most, the fact that you take out stories from rather simple subjects.
Cheers.
Paulo

Let it be :))) Super zdjęcie. Choć mnie te zamkniete drzwi stodoły (?) nie wiedziec czemu (;))) ) przypomina piosenkę "na sianeczku, sianie, na sianie, kochanie..." itd. ;)))))) Może coś jutro dodam lub zmienię, jak się wyśpię. Albo pojutrze. Teraz pozdrawiam nie mniej świetliście T.

Hi Jan.

An strange picture but...excellent contrasts. The fear atmosphere you got is impressive!

Rgs, Oscar

Each of your pics is a new provocation for me,you can see in everything and convert it a great subject for photography.Thanks for a new lesson.Simplicity and great management of light
A very good day

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  • pgorod Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 379 W: 64 N: 306] (1114)
  • [2007-05-23 11:44]

Hi Jan,

This is a simple, yet strong photo; the partially open door with the light coming through is very poetic and your treatment is very well done: high contrast, bright lights...

I like the high contrast... the light and all this dark... difficult to pu words on what I feel... superb will be my word : )

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  • tabora Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1192 W: 297 N: 1547] (12532)
  • [2007-05-29 7:26]

Bonjour jan,
Quel beau contre jour,que cache cette porte une ouverture vers le soleil ou l'enfer, il faut l'ouvrir pour...
beau travil.
Joseph

Witaj, Janku!
Bardzo mocna grafika, silny kontrast... to sprawia, że scena podobna jest w sile przekazu do obrazów ekspresjonistycznych. Podoba mi się pomysł!
pozdrawiam,
Grzesiek

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  • Ber Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 382 W: 17 N: 279] (6196)
  • [2008-02-12 12:01]

Dobre, dobre, bardzo dobre! Mam cos podobnego, ale teraz na pewno nie pokaze!

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