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car park - Bialystok


car park - Bialystok
Photo Information
Copyright: Maciej Dakowicz (maciekda) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1931 W: 203 N: 1393] (19356)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-10
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS 5D, Canon EF 35mm f/2
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-10-09 5:26
Viewed: 928
Points: 8
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
A car park in the city centre, at the back of an old residential building, Sienkiewicza street.
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To bantonbuju: I like itmaciekda 9 10-09 12:35
To Darren: sharpmaciekda 4 10-09 11:45
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lol
How such a great photographer like you can upload that ???
Am i missing something in your last 2 pictures ??
Come on Maciek !!

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  • jinju Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3167 W: 96 N: 1601] (14241)
  • [2006-10-09 8:17]

Witaj Maciek,

nie wiem. Wlasnie sprawdzilem twoje ostatnie zdjecie i bardzo mi sie podobalo: ten rozowy balonik i ci smetni ludzie, ale tutaj powiem ci ze nie wiem co o tym sadzic.

ale o co chodzi tym razem?

I am sorry to go against the flow, but I really like this one... The compo is very good and the color interplay is amazing. The S shaped form of the upper green foliage works perfectly against the gray concrete patterned floor. Than the ensemble of red cars on the right looks like they were put there by your own hand. They are so exquisite. The gray squared block and the blue container are key elements to strength the compo and the man holding the recycle bin is so good. Don’t know if it’s the mix of somber tones or the industrial mood of the scene, but the fact is that I really like it. Thanks.

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  • greg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 651 W: 311 N: 95] (2861)
  • [2006-10-09 10:02]

Yeah, I like it too...

It needs to at least be somewhat sharp...

well I for one am very happy that you are posting photos that you like and not the once you think others will like, hope you continue with this approach. As you can see not many complements about it, but it creates some discussions, which I love.
Having said that I will add to you enjoyment (as per your reply to Darren;-), don't like the photo at all. Photo is soft, doesn;t help in this case, light is flat and a guy tossing the garbage (even though I have done this many times in my life in similar scenario in Poland) just doesn't stir enough interest.
Peter

Witam. Myśle ze z tymi jasnozielonymi zbytnio sie czepili. Że niby nic nie przedstawia-to przecież taka codizenność. Zresztą warto spojrzeć w niektóre pf-foty mniej treściwe żeby nie powiedzieć gnioty, okraszone nieraz ideologiczną notką a TWA pieje z zachwytu. Tym bardziej że kompozycja jest tutaj poprawna-po przekątnej, dwa mocne punkty wykorzystane-niebieskość śmietnika z ludkiem i czerwień aut. Nie jest moze to coś co by zwaliło z nóg, ale nie należy tego przekreślać tak całkowicie. Na pewno jest lepsza od coniektóych fot okraszonych dziesiątkami punktów.
dam dużą zielona jako kontrę. I na pewno nie słodzę teraz a tylko stwierdzam fakty
pozdrawiam
Michał

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  • Ebbe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2752 W: 784 N: 1917] (9515)
  • [2006-10-15 14:50]

I like the blues feeling in this and the RBG-colors combined with grey.

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