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Porteplume (3440) 2003-03-03 5:46
A pity the horizon is a bit out of level and maybe too high? You also miss some sharpness.
I love the space, the hugeness and solitude of this landscape.
CedarBough (74) 2003-03-03 7:16
This one is tough, because the ground is interesting, and has nice colors, but the sky has the rainbow. I'd like to see a composition of this scene that was concentrating on the red barn as a point of interest, with those nice rocks in the foreground. A slight seeming tilt (right side lower) could be corrected in PShop if you want to keep the shot as it is. Overall the problem with this shot is too many good things... making it visually unclear. There is the red barn, the rainbow... they are dragging our eyes to opposite sides of the shot with no real link between them. The several red things in the foreground and the yellow thing also draw our interest, but we can't figure out what they are, because they are too small to identify. In a subtler way the rocks are really awesome and bring my eye, too. Then I look at the sky, the bits of clouds esp. on the right are getting interesting... so, too many good things have made something that doesn't work visually.