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portrait in the frame


portrait in the frame
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Copyright: Agnieszka Traczewska (Traczewska) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 352 W: 75 N: 619] (5186)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2007-08-10
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/6.3, 1/250 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-08-19 1:14
Viewed: 841
Points: 12
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
North of Norway, for me - visitor for the first time, almost the end of the World. White nights, fiords and jumping whales in Northern Sea..
In that are you can drive miles and see nobody. Not numerous shops, no cafes, restaurant..

In one bar found by the chance I drank coffee from the broken machine and ate dry chips.. but the real award was cheerful girl of typical skandinavian type of beauty, in spite of rain and wind accompanied his father outside ..

This is her portrait from inside taken in the frame of the window.. the bar at the end od no-where..

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  • Great 
  • kri54 Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 401 W: 30 N: 23] (1353)
  • [2007-08-19 1:20]

superbe cadrage, belle vue à travers la fenêtre
très naturel
bonne journée
christine
je vais faire un tour dans ta galerie

Dobry zamysł, nawet fajnie to wygląda na podglądzie, ale coś zaszwankowało w kompozycji i nie do końca przemawia.
Pozdrawiam!

Reall well done framing. Jsut great!!

  • Great 
  • ninaL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1781 W: 229 N: 1861] (15483)
  • [2007-08-19 5:38]

A mnie sie podoba i przemawia.
Bardzo oryginalny kadr dla portretu dziewczynki.
Pozdrawiam. Grazyna.

Half-a-million kids posted on TE, and if you managed to be visible - you may toast yourself a sweet taste of winning our hearts...
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Be unique... Stay visible...

jurek

very unique and original picture. The composition is truly beautiful. Nice work.
B

pomimo oczywistej (ulubione slowo-wytrych naszego milosciwie nam panujacego jaroslawa iv-rzeczpospolitego, ktorego cudownym trafem dni sa policzone ku szczesliwosci mojej przeogromnej) "chlodnosci" otoczenia tan portret jest cieply, jest przyciagajycy jakims optymizmem...
przydalby sie intensywniejszy bokeh zeby wyeliminowac ten balagan w glebokim tle, ale i tak jest urok w tym zdjeciu...
pozdr. j

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  • kajspice Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 569 W: 66 N: 772] (4495)
  • [2007-08-22 13:24]

Agnieszka ,

here I am again...feeling this precious nostalgic moment. Lots of elements here which help to tell your story. I like the wind which is sweeping through her hair as she is looking towards something/someone... makes you wonder what is going on..

Lovely framing of her and her father through the glass. In fact, you framed her just perfectly. That condensation on the window is superb..

I'm going to look at some more..

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