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TE259 Tubes
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Copyright: Rob Zwemmer (alvaraalto) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2359 W: 299 N: 698] (2340)
Genre: Places
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2006-08-16
Categories: Artwork
Exposure: f/3.2, 1/15 seconds
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Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-05-10 14:25
Viewed: 311
Points: 46
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
TE259

Sculpture in the garden of the Kröller-Müller Museum


A Few Rules for Beginners


Babies must not eat the coal
And they must not make grimaces,
Nor in party dresses roll
And must never black their faces.

They must learn that pointing's rude,
They must sit quite still at table,
And must always eat the food
Put before them--if they're able.

If they fall, they must not cry,
Though it's known how painful this is;
No--there's always Mother by
Who will comfort them with kisses.

Katherine Mansfield (1888-1823)

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Bonsoir, cher ami Rob,
La vie c'est ce que tu vois : de la membrane, de la tripe, un trou sans fond qui exige d'être rempli. La vie est ce tuyau qui avale et qui reste vide.
[Amélie Nothomb]
Sculpture en plein air, tout le monde peut profiter ainsi de compositions contemporaines. Il faut reconnaître que ces tubes ont un pouvoir attirant, notre regard est comme hypnotisé par cet ensemble.
Très bien fait comme à l'accoutumée.
Amitiés.
Philippe

Hi Rob
Very graphic picure ! perfect arrangement after PP
I really like it
JP

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  • danyy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 7113 W: 434 N: 9604] (49040)
  • [2008-05-10 15:03]

Là, c'est du graphisme dans toute son essence.
In s'imagine difficlement cette oeuvre dans son environnement, tellement le cadrge l'exclut du reste.
Quand on zoome, on voit très bien le photographe dans un de ces tubes.
Bravo l'artiste.
Excellent week-end.
Daniel.

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  • Tue Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5085 W: 56 N: 7150] (22889)
  • [2008-05-10 15:42]

Hi Rob,
Die andere fotograaf moet op een flink afstandje gestaan hebben, als zijn hele hoofd in die buis past. :-P
Mooie herhaling van al die buizen met al hun ronde vormen, horizontalen en verticalen.
Groeten,
Lars

Hi Rob
Interesting place to take a photo and the sculpture is certainly very graphic. It's good having the circle where you're taking the photo to draw the eye. Personnaly I think I would have preferred a vertical frame with circle to the right to make it more dynamic.
Regards
Nikki

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  • paura Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 3723 W: 8 N: 2427] (19550)
  • [2008-05-11 2:59]

Rob,
You are a master in visual effect shot. Another great one. Very beautiful shapes indeed.

Well done.

Paulo

Agreed with Paolo,great visual effect
I see there inside of one tube something,what is that?:)
Hugs

Bonsoir Rob
un superbe graphisme ici. j'aime bien la présence du photographe. Joli coup d'oeil pour sortir cette photo. bravo.
Xavier

Rob, c'est de la très belle photo d'une très belle oeuvre d'art.
J'aime le rythme et l'alternance créés par les éléments. Le métal poli donne toute la beauté avec les reflets.
Un plaisir pour les yeux.
Jacques

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12263 W: 244 N: 16018] (64164)
  • [2008-05-11 10:24]

Hallo Bert,

Grafisch werk is dit absoluut, maar hoe te fotograaf daar tussen komt met zijn hoofd, dit is mijn niet zo goed duidelijk.
Het Kröller-Müller museum heeft op het vlak een goede reputatie, om moderne en speciale schilderijen te laten zien.
Bedankt voor uw bezoek.

Groeten,
John.
PS: ik denk dat 6 juni voor mij past, misschien is Brugge een goed alternatief.
Ik zal uw een mail sturen

Very unusual and very nice. But who is peeping though the tube in the middle?

All the best,

Emmanuel

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  • Emile Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3905 W: 135 N: 4140] (15287)
  • [2008-05-11 21:37]

Hola Rob.
A piece of art with a good graphic component, a monochromic shot with just one tube with color, very well captured, very good crop and frame.
Well done. TFS.
Wish you a good week ahead.
Best regards.

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  • leo61 Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3515 W: 316 N: 6854] (29228)
  • [2008-05-11 22:05]

Hi ROB!
Great shot,very graphic.Very nice grey and silver tones and amazing sharpness and contrast.Very well seen and managed.
Regards,Leo

Hello Rob,
Absolotely minimalistic and totally artistic...
Once more a wonderful idea to compose a different and modern image!

Have a nice week,
Thomas

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  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4559 W: 115 N: 407] (40103)
  • [2008-05-11 23:55]

Hi Rob,
amazing theme and pattern. Good captured. Well quality of photo. Fine idea and realization. I like it.
Gr., Aleksander

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8622 W: 910 N: 11369] (55026)
  • [2008-05-12 0:51]

Hi Rob

It's good to have just one colour tube, breaking the b&w pattern. Excellent repetition & sharpness. Tfs!

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  • UlfE Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1362 W: 14 N: 1346] (5455)
  • [2008-05-12 10:23]

Hi Rob,

A really graphically appealing shot and a masterly presentation of this sculpture. Looking at it a little bit like find five errors. There is something in Tube F3, F10 is higher than the other row 10 tubes, vertical bar # 1 is shorter than the others etc. TFS!

Cheers,

Ulf

I love the pattern and geometry of this one Rob. You have framed it so carefully. Well done
Kath

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  • Stepan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4837 W: 93 N: 3775] (24620)
  • [2008-05-13 12:27]

Always more arty, always more abtract... But it's your gallery, now, and it works...
Pretty strange, but that's the purpose. Then...
Stéphane

Hi Rob
Very nice this graphical composition with tubes. Have the position (3,6) a hole ?
Very well framed and done
Warm greetings
Aires

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  • danos Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3043 W: 82 N: 4413] (16467)
  • [2008-05-14 2:11]

Hello Rob,
very nice shot that was captured the metallic sculpture,with very nice graphistic way and at the some time a minimalistic one.The verticals and horizontals lines make your capture 'particular'.The color and the light are nice .Informative your note too.Congratulations.

Regards,Danos

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  • sevy Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 579 W: 107 N: 852] (5059)
  • [2008-05-15 2:28]

Surprizing photo with a strong composition putting in evidence the pattern and symetry in this narrow rectangle.
Nice to see the eye of someone just on the other side of the sculpture. It is providing a kind of humanity in this metal world.

Yves.

Hello Rob,

Joli, ce graphisme ! Bien vu, le photographe !
Bonne journée
Marie

back in your galery, i see there is a lot of removed photos ! i remember some which are great and it's a pity they are not there now,
cool shot here with a hypnotic graphism and a great tiny detail with the photographer,
the photographer photographed like the waterer watered ;)
regards
jo

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