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amstel and bike


amstel and bike
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Copyright: Mustafa Kahraman (MmK) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 34 W: 0 N: 17] (79)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-04-30
Categories: Nature
Camera: Nikon Coolpix 2100
Exposure: f/2.6
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-06-13 12:09
Viewed: 813
Points: 7
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
This is an classical view in Amsterdam...Canals and the bicycle.
I would be glad with your comments and advices.
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  • Fevzi Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 17 W: 0 N: 11] (123)
  • [2006-06-13 13:10]
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Nice shot Mustafa. I suspect for most there is nothing to focus on. I mean the picture is lacking a focal point. But I cannot think of anything you could have done to improve the composition. For me it was the bike wheel and the dynamo that got my attention. I had not seen a bike with a dynamo for such a long time. TFS

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  • nika Gold Star Critiquer [C: 455 W: 0 N: 0] (0)
  • [2006-06-14 6:35]
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Some parts of the pic , mainly in the background appeared a bit overexposed , the sharpness could be improveable as well as contrast levels. Moreover the image seems tilted and agree with Fevzi about the need of finding a focal point to avoid the "eyes" get lost (just applying a bit of Postprocessing techniques all these little adjustments would be easily corrected) but the idea , originality and perspective are very nice and remarkable ! Best wishes !

I think that for Amsterdam is nothing more special as bikes :)
great idea and cool image :)
regurds Olga

Hi Mustafa!
I like bike in first plan.You show many remarkableness of Amsterdam.Beautiful canal,
arhitecture....Sky is a little boring,but this is the problem everywhere. Have a nice weekend.

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