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5 girls
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Copyright: Kajal Nisha Patel (kajspice) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 569 W: 66 N: 772] (4495)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-07-03
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Olympus Mju 410
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-02-21 5:06
Viewed: 1755
Points: 19
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I just thought this was a sweet picture...

Picture quality isn't great because it was taken from a distance.

There were a few people behind the girls, which were quite distracting...I have cloned them out...can you tell?

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Nice capture Kajal, as you well said, it's a sweet picture... compliments!!

have a nice day,
Fabio.

Hi Kajal,

Thts really a sweet picture. I was jus reading abt Street Photography, and found yours to be an good example. (Shooting from a long distance).

And you have a done a perfect PP. I could not figure out any cloning here, if you have done one really ;-) Did you clone the place in between the girl wearing bright green and the middle girl and places on top of her??

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  • lukas Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 421 W: 62 N: 282] (1974)
  • [2006-02-21 7:54]
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Good shot, very lovely. I can see you cloned a bit on the floor, but it doesn't matter for this subject. Luc

I cant find any cloning, maybe iam not graduated up to that level.
This one gives me immense pleasure for the reason that you have switched from your similar shots .
I liked the idea behind this shot, an intersting group.
Hope they will be united and friendly for a long long period.
Thanks for sharing this view and remembering me there are still young people like this.

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  • sufi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1784 W: 192 N: 1553] (9468)
  • [2006-02-21 13:52]

It's a very cute photo...
congratulations..

Hi Kajal,
Thnaks very much for this nicely done capture with these five girls on the street. Excelent moment view and a great and so well framed composition. Be wellcomed to TE and congratulations by my side and vision.

What do I like about this?.... So, my opinion:

a) your simple notes and what more for a simple also moment and nice daily street life.

b) the fact they asked you to don't take the picture by a frontal view ;-)))

c) the simplicity, (no photoshop modifications)... Okay

d) the expressions on their faces and clothing, especially the boy on far left..... ??? No expressions on their faces neither the boy .... Did you have the complementar post at WS.

e) the off-center posistioning of the children.... Nobody is off-centered and the children is seeing the girls passing!

An adorable picture..., BRAVO

Thanks for sharing and my complementar critique to your nice way to do citiques.

Congratulations and all the best to you and your stay at TE.
Fernando

Quite a capture I must say. 5 young gals walking the street. I liked the idea behind this shot, an intersting group. I wish them the best in life ...

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  • cigdom Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 287 W: 55 N: 89] (1555)
  • [2006-02-28 14:35]

Excellent CApture!
great composition!Great WOrk..colours ,girls look very beautiful..
TFS Well DOne
regards...
cigdem//

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  • xuaxo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2546 W: 165 N: 2375] (4031)
  • [2006-03-01 9:44]

That's a happy day in the Netherlands, what is easier to achieve there than in many other places on this planet.
I'm not expert about cloning an such, but if it means to erase things from the original picture, in principle I don't like it (maybe I'd accept it better in a Workshop, or at TL).
Anyway, this photo it's nice.
One more point: is this in Amsterdam, the Netherlands, or in another Amsterdam in Netherlands Antilles?

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  • partha Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1489 W: 85 N: 1295] (12862)
  • [2006-04-20 13:03]

We will go together, nice theme and beautiful composition.
partha

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  • ilgar Gold Star Critiquer [C: 61 W: 0 N: 0] (556)
  • [2006-04-23 5:31]

hi kajal
thank you
I can speak pershian and turkish
I cant speak english god

Really nice shot . Very beautiful composition .

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