Photographer’s Note
On a visit to Scheveningen harbour I saw this ship lying as I got out of my car. I like the colour combination of the orange, white and black with the contrasting pole in the front.
Let me hear what you think of it.
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elroyie
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(2750) 2004-07-04 14:04
The composition is almost good, you should put the pole more to the right because the frame for the viewer is starting from the pole to the left. There is another problem of lighting, you took this shot in a very difficult light and there are 'signs' to that in the frame.
RandomCameraGuy
(3063) 2004-07-17 11:48
Nice details in this. I like the colours too. But I would crop out quite a bit to the right of the mooring, lighten the background, adjust curves a touch more, and boost saturation. The result will be less natural but more dynamic (IMO). Cheers Jan!
Photo Information
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Copyright: Jan Kooreman (kooreman)
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(321) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2004-07-02
- Categories: Transportation
- Camera: Canon Digital Rebel (D300), Canon EF 17-40 L
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2004-07-04 4:52
