Remember "Saljut" Photo

Photographer’s Note

This is an old Soviet bicycle named "Saljut"! In translation - salute. In my childhood it was my!

p.s. for my brother - asta-i ea, bicicleta noastra!

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rajiv_077 (1355) 2007-04-17 7:38

Hi Dan

very nice picture, good and unique pov of this scene's. nice framing, good colours and lights, Wall's colours, windows, and cycle is looking intresing, could be more better if you capture complete window in left one.

Uzi (1148) 2007-04-17 7:39

it's quite good capture.
You have good eye ..
but there are a little mistake in compositoin IMHO :
- I think that right window should be all in photo and also a little wall or only one window with bike and veritcally
- high of photograph view it's too low . it'll look better if you have a camera higher

but next to that it's very nice photo
cheers
Iza

Zandell (241) 2007-04-17 9:36

Hi Dan..

Very good simple picture..with good colors and reflections in windows..

I agree with guys above about the second window...better if whole ...but I agree with artist view too..

If the artist post something I'm sure he think a lot about composition...never know ..maybe the window is broken or there are some elements that will kill the whole composition..

Anyway, this is a great nostalgique picture with typical soviet colors...

Thank you..

sandu

In case of vertical view I'm not sure..

Tweety (3376) 2007-04-17 13:10

Bonjour Dan
J'aime beaucoup cette photo mais j'aurais deux petites suggestions à faire pour tenter de l'améliorer :
- la symétrie d'axe vertical n'est pas parfaitement réalisée, il manque quelques centimètres sur la droite.
- le vélo mériterait d'être placé entre les deux fenêtres
Néanmoins, ce cliché est très agréable. Bravo !

flatwin (1934) 2007-07-14 12:17