Sunset at Gudja Photo

Photographer’s Note

A Sunset....

I can see it....

It is....

Ubiquitous....

Majestic....

Artist God....

Is painting the sky!...
He is creating by His Spirit...

In a timely manner....

Right before my very eyes....

Diverse from other's gone past....

Tis' Art beyond comprehension....

I'm being embraced within my soul....

With the love of a Sunset....

Tis' so majestically intact....

And He is gladly giving me this sovereign view....

With inspiration of joy...

And even the most integral words can't capture...

A Sunset....

Tis' proof of His love for me....

I will ne'er forget this important event....

As it is disappearing right from my very eyes....

Until the next time that He invents a sun that blooms....

So gloriously....

Tears are falling as this glory starts to fade away....

I say good-night and blow a kiss into the wind....

God's Heavenly sites are filled with deep colors....

And are Preordained with priceless beauty...

Breathtaking scenes are eternally etched within my mind....

So that I can still see one of earth's timeless treasures....

Although it's already gone down past the horizon....

And I am looking out into the starry night....

I can feel God's Love....

And I can still see one of His beautiful Masterpieces....

My face feels touched by God's warm glow....

Of a very special Sunset...

Angshu, jorgi, philpet, andreagatt has marked this note useful

Critiques | Translate

jorgi (3798) 2008-02-08 2:13

Hi Andrea,

what specially impresses me with this sunset shot is the yellow flow of light going into purple. It makes it different from other sunsets but honestly, every sunset is different and makes one heart warm and fullfilled with joy. I, myself, am always touched by its display of colours. The only thing I would do different is a small crop, to leave out the half of black bottom of the picture. Just to give more space to purple sky as it it is more pleasing to watch. :)

Kind regards,
Jeri

barrufeto_77 (25809) 2008-02-08 4:59

Hi Andrea.

Nice idea but...try few things.

Firsly..crop the bottom. It's too dark and it's not important for the picture.

Secondly...clone the wires. They could be here interesting if a bird of something unusual will be on them.

and thirdly...well done!

Rgs, Oscar

maltagirl (554) 2008-02-08 5:16

Hi Andrea,

Lovely sunset colours, I like the purple on your photo, not so much of a common colour to see in sunsets.
Would have done without the wires and a bit less of the dark bottom. But still, well done.
We're here to learn from the critiques we receive, and that's why TE is a great place to post your shots. Regards.
Marthese

char_mifsud (540) 2008-02-08 8:17

Hello Andrea,
Lovely sunset colors, I like the purple on your photo, above the sun. Well done.
Regards,
Charles

berek (28909) 2008-02-08 12:38

Hi Andrea,
greetings from Istanbul. I like this sunset view and beautiful sunset colours.
Burak Erek

Angshu (33697) 2008-02-11 3:00

Your note is well written Andrea. The cloud in front of the sun makes it for me...lovely silhouette of the FG against the bright sky.
Regards
Angshu

prumod (8262) 2008-02-16 10:32

hi andrea....
good colors and frame... with more clarity it would be more attractive....
greetings...

Bluejeans (32391) 2008-02-26 10:40

Ola Andrea
Bonito pôr do sol , o ceu ficou muito bonito com as nuvens , podias ter cortado um pouco do primeiro plano e clonado os fios , parabéns!!!!
Um abraço Gonçalo