before the winter
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itamaratiya (539) 2006-02-21 8:55
Just wonderfull composition. I really like the way your picture is devided to 3 parts (like in the books...).
I think the image could be better if the DOF was deeper, so the eye would be tracked into the picture (it might not be possible because it depends on the equipment you have).
There is another point that I believe could be better, and those are the colors. While the colors of the timbers is very good, the rest is a bit overexposed, and therefore a bit bright (especially the skies). I think it would worthy to try taking that picture (if you can do it again...) with measuring the light by the skies. It would make the timbers be darker, but I believe the final result might be better.
avista (0) 2006-02-22 4:27
Uste edna ubava slika od tvoja strana.
BAs mi asocira na fotografija na 5 nivoa: drvata za ogrev, drvjata, seloto planinata i neboto.
Mishe (3515) 2006-02-23 2:53
Mnogu ubava slika.
Bojan (1630) 2006-03-06 19:21
Zdravo Jone :)
Najiskreno, mnogu mi se dopaga tvojot oset za kompozicija i ostroto oko. Nisto ne ti bega. Bravo
daddo (23104) 2006-04-10 0:11
Zdravo Jone. Mnogo me se svidja ova slika. I particularly like the way it is composed, so that the eye travels from the foreground to the middle ground and then into the distance.Effective stratification.Pozdrav.