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Feel ashamed...


Feel ashamed...
Photo Information
Copyright: Krzysztof Dera (Fis2) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2497 W: 142 N: 1537] (33257)
Genre: People
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2005-05-03
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: Canon EOS Elan IIe, Tamron AF28-200 LD Aspherical (IF), Fuji Superia 200
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-03-28 5:31
Viewed: 778
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 39
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note [Polish]
Wilniaus-Stage before church.
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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12731 W: 272 N: 16984] (67992)
  • [2007-03-28 5:42]

Hi Krzysztof,

A tradional pose from the ladies for a church, I've respect for all belief under the peoples, also for these two women. Maybe want these woman not on the photograph she cover up her face. Composition and sharpness are very nice!

Have a nice day,
John.

Hello Krzysztof,
A poignant candid shot of these two elderly women outside the church. One wonders what they are contemplating in this apparent moment of sorrow.

Hi Krzystof,
Like John, I had the same thought about if they feel ashamed, or if they didn't wanted to be photographed. In Riga, Russian orthodox people stand outside churches all the time, hoping for some (financial) help from visitors. I know from various people, that they are not proud to be there.
Technically, I like your composition, although the ladies have some colourfull clothes, it still feeles gray, maybe also becuase of their winterclothes and expression.
regards,
David

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  • faubry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3598 W: 356 N: 4329] (28186)
  • [2007-03-28 5:57]

hello Krzysztof, like jhm, it s a traditional pose in front of chuch, but more in Ukrainia, and ex east countries,very true shot
soon
francine

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  • jasmis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2906 W: 618 N: 3203] (39009)
  • [2007-03-28 6:01]

Ciekawe babiny pod kościołem uchwycone na gorąco. Robi wrażenie.
Pozdrawiam.

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  • Booz Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 475 W: 14 N: 134] (10399)
  • [2007-03-28 6:06]

Witam - http://pl.trekearth.com/gallery/Europe/Ukraine/photo148895.htm - to link do mojego lwowskiego zdjęcia o podobnej wymowie.. - kolejna dobra reporterka..
Pozdrawiam,
TW


Widze ze udalo Ci sie calkiem bardzo zestresowac dwie starsze panie... :-) A co to jest, to takie zolte i zielone, ktore trzymaja w lapkach ??? Czy dobrze zakładam, ze chodzi o zbieranie pieniedzy ??? Fajna fotografia!

Pozdrawiam serdecznie,
pawel

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  • ninaL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1801 W: 244 N: 1906] (15933)
  • [2007-03-28 6:34]

No, to jest mocne.
Ale ja nie robie ludziom zdjecia, gdy zaslaniaja sobie twarz.
No i gdy akurat zebrza...i to z tak bliska.
Dotknales waznej granicy etycznej tutaj...
Ale fota mocna, i moglaby wywolac dyskusje.
Pozdrawiam. Grazyna.

What a sad scene. Impressing picture. Great details, true colours
Achim

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  • Gerrit Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4311 W: 88 N: 5324] (25700)
  • [2007-03-28 10:42]

Hi Krzysztof,
Good but confronting shot. I feel sorry for these women and feel somewhat of theuir shame being caught like this.
REgards, Gerrit

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  • Cormac Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3245 W: 56 N: 5986] (25032)
  • [2007-03-28 10:54]

This may be the best of your recent series on people. The moment is good, as the two women are sitting and talking, and one places her had over her face as if to say that she is embarassed. Great timing and interesting shot!

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  • Gustaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2438 W: 714 N: 196] (20556)
  • [2007-03-28 13:39]

Witam!
Ciekawa scenka rodzajowa. Ano tak już jest... Chyba w każdym mieście świata można zobaczyć takie widoczki. Dobra jakość zdjęcia.
Marek

Hi Krzysztof,
I don't why she is hiding her face but against the old wall and worn down door, their presence is pretty symbolic.
With Greetings from India
Sabyasachi

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  • elmec Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1724 W: 63 N: 774] (12184)
  • [2007-03-28 15:31]

Witaj Krzyśku!
Swietną scenkę rodzajową złapałeś.
Bardzo dobrze skomponowany fragment starych drzwi i te Panie, również pamiętające odległe czasy....
Gratuluję!
Pozdrawiam!

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  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4915 W: 121 N: 509] (43305)
  • [2007-03-29 2:14]

Ale przestraszyles kobitki, chca byc anonimowe, fajnie zlapana scenka przed kosciolem. Kadr, kolory i ostrosc - wszystko ok.
Pozdr. Al.

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  • jlynx Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 663 W: 75 N: 810] (9746)
  • [2007-03-29 6:39]

Witaj przyjacielu,
Co tutaj dużo gadać, świetna fotka reportażowa. Nic dodać, nic ująć. Znakomicie pokazana scenka, bardzo ładna jakość.
Pozdrawiam serdecznie,
Jurek

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  • john_c Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4905 W: 53 N: 5951] (24618)
  • [2007-03-30 11:02]

Hi Krzysztof,
A poignant, moving scene outside of this church. It is hard to determine what exact emotions the one woman is experiencing, but one definitely empathizes with her. I like this natural scene, with good lighting and contrast. The open church door on the right is symbolic perhaps of hope and help. A crisp clear capture. Well done, my friend.
John

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  • Paolo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4704 W: 146 N: 9096] (40013)
  • [2007-03-30 11:04]

Hi Krzysztof, excellent portraits, brilliant and with beauitufl colours and good quality.
thanks, ciao

Witaj wiosennie:)))
Swietna, rewelacyjnie skladrowana scenka z życia codziennego tych kobiet.
Mój ulubiony temat, świetnie złapane!

A.

Wyrzuc to zdjecie, krzysztof !!!!
Robisz krzywde tym kobietom.
Scena jest wyrazna. One sie wstydza. One nie chca byc fotografowane. Tylko ich wola sie liczy w tej chwili i widac to calkiem wyraznie. Nie nasze filozofowanie co mozna a co nie mozna, tylko ich...tych kobiet.
To nie zazenowana filuternosc jak czasami bywa u tylu innych ludzi, to jest wyrazny brak zezwolenia. I kropka.
Gdybys potrafil nawiazac kontakt z nimi, usmiechnac sie i porozmawiac, i poprosic o pozwolenie, i zazartowac...
Wtedy bylaby inna sprawa.
Nic z tych rzeczy na tym zdjeciu.
Wyrzuc prosze...

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  • dareco Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1760 W: 42 N: 789] (11205)
  • [2007-08-30 0:25]

This makes me smile. Such a natural reaction. A very nice picture. Nice colors. TFS

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