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Flight of the may bug


Flight of the may bug
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Copyright: Paulius Briedis (PTAH) Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 48 W: 12 N: 23] (280)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2004-06-04
Categories: Nature
Camera: Canon Powershot A100
Exposure: f/2.8, 1/320 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2004-06-10 4:34
Viewed: 1289
Points: 5
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Part two (of 4) from the series about a may bug.

So this is one of the pictures I've managed to hunt chasing this bug. Gives a mood of summer :]

The first picture, with main description.
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to bazal :D overexposedPTAH 1 06-10 11:57
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  • Good 
  • bazal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2539 W: 124 N: 2378] (7886)
  • [2004-06-10 5:36]

The shot is impressive and the composition would be great if it wasn't so over-exposed ! A strong correction of brightness and contrast (PS) would be needed. The sharpness of the bug is really nice and it would be a great shot !

  • Great 
  • Gatis Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 211 W: 37 N: 180] (899)
  • [2004-06-11 5:25]

The idea of this picture is great! And I know how hard is to catch something like this - have tryed!
Regarding postprocessing - I get your point. Still it kills the image somehow.
Just try to get 100 more beetles flying against the sun - and finally one of them would make a really good composition (just kidding ;).
Anyway I like the mood of this picture very much!

  • Great 
  • nicoz Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 252 W: 14 N: 305] (1963)
  • [2006-11-14 10:45]

Hi Paulius,
Great idea here, some sort of summery high key portrait of a bug. I like the way you overexposed it in general, but feel that the top righ bit is just too bright, and therefore attrects the eyes away from your key subject (the bug) that is in the lower left corner. It's a good trial anyway and you got the summer mood spot on!
Nicolas

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