on the road

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• Zanni (5793)
• [2006-01-22 15:15]
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A good composition but the upper part is overexposed and useless. For a more dramatic composition I'd avoid to show his destination (the church): so the mistery increases. I did a WS
Ciao

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• Marinaio (69)
• [2006-01-22 16:03]

I like the use of soft color (at first glance I didn't understand if the photo was black/wite or color), and the grey sky is the one of the autumn/winter in the northern Italy.
I disagree also with Zanni, the church gives a completeness to the photo (I will se also th WS)
Claudio

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• greg (2827)
• [2006-01-23 5:02]
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I like your composition - there seems to be a lot of potential here, but the image seems very flat to me. I tried a WS...