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• Xplorator (652)
• [2006-07-17 5:12]
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I agree with the title...

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• david (3962)
• [2006-07-17 5:29]
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she does look very good, but photographically, this isn't a good presentation of your subject.

firstly, the photo is on an angle. there are glasses and straws in the foreground.

at least make an effort to try and get the shot, instead of snapping and throwing it on TE.

lastly, no note ... means no effort ... so no points!

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• pascal13 (1494)
• [2006-07-17 6:25]
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Bonjour Marco,
effectivement cette jeune fille a l'air plutôt sexy,cependant elle n'est pas mise en valeur,le sujet est centré,apparemment elle est en train de danser puisqu'elle tient la main de son cavalier,mais sur cette photo on a plus l'impression qu'elle est serveuse de bar avec ces verres en premier plan et les personnes qu'on voit en second plan.Elle est dans l'ombre et l'image manque de netteté.
Désolé d'être un peu sévère.Ce n'est que mon point de vue.
Pascal

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• vinicio (19256)
• [2006-07-17 10:56]
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Sono d'accordo con le critiche abbastanza feroci, non hai mostrato al meglio la bellezza della ragazza, forse ne sei cosi affascinato che in qualsiasi modo la vedi, la vedi bella...
Ma la qualità della foto è ottima e merita un premio.
Ciao
Vinicio

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• arturo (31)
• [2006-07-17 11:53]
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Hi Marco,

i like the angle & the light very much...not to mention the relaxed, summer mood...although both empty glasses with straws give me a proper bar feeling i would not include them in the foreground...in my opinion they make this image and the scene appearing too candid and they are quite distracting...then on the other side an even more **sexy** approach towards your subject could result in an even better audience but also this photo would be more likely deleted from TE...it's quiet funny how an image with a pretty girl on it can catch attention and also polarize few of the comments it gets...i find this situation quite amusing to be honest...btw. the note is missing though;-)...cheers, arturo

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• balatrek (7312)
• [2006-07-17 16:34]
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Hola Marco,

He leído las criticas a tu fotografía y hay de todo, me gusta la inclinación de la imagen le aporta un aire diferente, efectivamente hay algunas cosas que sobran, los vasos ..., una sugerencia, para poder darle un aire más dinámico la próxima vez prueba una velocidad de obturación mas baja, creara un bonito efecto, por ultimo darte las gracias por compartir y mostrar esas ganas de ser criticado sin importar si las criticas son positivas o negativas, suerte.

Saludos, José

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• corleone (2)
• [2006-08-02 11:57]

Mamma mia ! Bellissima proprio !

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• rewshearer (682)
• [2006-08-02 23:14]

Hi Marco
I'm with you, I love this series purely for the DJ. As a shot I think this could have been cropped better and sharper, but DOF is still good and colours are wonderful - and subject is superb. :)
TFS
Rew