Yellow Bird

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• DarkoG (2236)
• [2006-09-16 7:24]

Nice touch of colour contrast. Yellow bird and gray wall gives pleasent contrast to this photo.
Remarks goes to composition. It's too central.
I think that you have to crop right part of picture just to cut right side leaves out of photo. That way your photo would be much more dynamic and stronger.

Regards Darko

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• paulw (2010)
• [2006-09-16 8:08]
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Nice image of a canary. Beautiful colours in the bird and nice contrast with the white wall. Was it behind glass? Nice image. I've done a workshop, just to re-crop the image and also sharpen it slightly.

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• saeedabbasi (280)
• [2006-09-16 8:19]
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• rosaline (0)
• [2006-09-17 4:05]

Hi Priya
Good capture here with some good colour contrast between the yellow bird and the neutral background. The picture needs to be a bit crisper and sharper though, and as Darko suggested, not so central in the composition. An off-center approach tends to work better in most, not all, compositions. Otherwise, a good effort. Hope this helps.
Aubrey

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• sufi (9468)
• [2006-09-17 19:17]

Hi Priya...
It's a simple but wonderful composition and very cute photograph... The point of view and the colors are beautiful...
TFS...
Stay well..
Salim.

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• Kosynierka (84)
• [2006-09-22 16:38]

Nice contrast... The color of the bird is beautiful.