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Photographer’s Note

Tower by 13th century Cathedral in Kildare. There is view point on the top.

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SteveH (3893) 2006-11-01 18:11

Hi Agnieszka, This looks like an interesting subject. I think though that your shot could have been improved by cropping the branches in the top left and the shadow and articles in the foreground which distract without adding to the shot. Perhaps also changing you POV to exclude the power lines. More generally, perhaps you could have found another angle to make the shot as interesting as the subject might allow. Hope this is helpful. cheers, Steve

fijiphil (1343) 2006-11-01 22:14

I would have included more of the branches perhaps (and probably cloned out those powerlines) but as Steve says, I would definitely have tried to avoid those shadows right down at the base of the shot. Maybe you could have taken that big cross we see on the RHS as a foreground object, with the tower in the background?