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The old family farm in Ireland. One of the few days it didn't rain...
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xavis
(3174) 2007-09-19 14:58
Hola,
I love Ireland. I have rest one month when I was young, with a family, and I have enjoy my self a lot. Specially I like a lot the green fields.
You have seen well in this picture. The fields, with the cloudy sky,...you brings well the ambience of this country. But there is a little probleme of composition of the picture: we don't see where the road goes. I think it's important to have in a picture:
-first: an ambience or a theme (in this case the Irish ambience with fields and cloudy sky).
-second: colours and contrast, or shadows and lights in Black and White.
-third: a composition of the picture. You can make a composition in several ways. The most commonts are to respect the roule of the third: it means that you have to place a subject in a third of the picture or in a corner, but not in the corner of the picture, just a little inside of the picture. Another "roule" is to observe the lines of the picture: the horizon, the fields, the road,... in this case all the lines goes in different ways, and it's more difficult to see well all the picture. A way to improve this, is for example to look for another place where you can take the picture with the same road, but that we can see where il goes, for example: to the horizon. Like this you have a picture that make us to follow a direction with our eyesight. Then is more dynamique and interesting also.
In any way, good job, and enjoy your self with photographie. It's good.
Hasta la vista,
Javier
PS: I hope you understand more or less my English, sorry for the great mistakes).
Photo Information
- Copyright: Christopher Kucenski (chrisemt74) (37)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2006-07-00
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2007-09-19 8:22








