...Sunset... Photo

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duder (319) 2005-04-25 19:49

I like this photo a lot. I thought that it lacked some sharpness and contrast, so I did a workshop to try to improve this.

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Emile (19999) 2005-04-25 20:55

Muy buena foto, lindo atardecer.
El trabajo de Adam esta muy bueno.
Muy buena composicion.

toddadams (566) 2005-04-25 21:20

It is a nice scene, but really too soft. I would post a re-working of it that I did in Photoshop, but I'm not sure how to do that yet. A bit of Unsharp Mask would help this greatly.

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thpfister (240) 2005-04-26 2:50

Sorry Surina,

this image, even if you touch it up, doesn't say anything. Sounds a bit devastating, but it is a shot for me like 100000 other pictures taken every day around the world.

Work on your composition, follow the 1/3 rules and use foreground and backgrounds. watch you timing e.g. and do the shot a bit later this eve on a tripod with a longer exposure (about 20-30 sec), it will tint the sky nicely blue and will give the picture an ice touch, which expresses the coldness.

Rgds
Thomas