Nyugati gallery Photo

Photographer’s Note

I don;t think I'll ever get board of taking pictures of Eilfel's masterpiece in Budapest, and I've taken this gallery along the south side of Nyugati station before, but I liked the distant father and son in this one.

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leo61 (43398) 2008-11-03 10:31

Hi Richard!
Maybe a bit too much overexposure at the end of this "tunel",but I like the silhouetttes of father and son,mother and daughter??????A good perspectiveshot!!!
Regards,leo

jalab_temen (1945) 2008-11-04 0:36

Hi Richard,
to be honest I browse your portfolio and try to find an image to comment, but there are too many interesting photos indeed; so I decided sharing my opinion on the latest one.

I like the superbly graphic composition emphasizing the style of Eiffel; the intimate atmosphere of the little figure of the father and his child; the amazingly managed lights, and finally that special felling of old railway stations that almost make you feel the smell of them.

In WS I send you my recomposed/trimmed version as a suggession to avoid clumsy parts.

Thank you for sharing it.

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Isabelle (9014) 2008-11-04 1:28

I prefer this version of yours, with father and son walking into white. The graphic aspect is very pleasing to the eye.
Nice b&w convertion too.

snunney (34868) 2008-11-04 1:28

Hello Richard,
A good long perspective with interesting graphical lines. The far end is rather over-exposed but that has the advantage of silhouetting father and son and adds to the move.

jhm (82487) 2008-11-04 3:19

Hello Richard,

A splendid tunnel effect, a good long perspective with interesting graphical lines.
Also the shadow lines care for a very wel graphical image.
You have managed to use the low angle lighting to create excellent colors and warmth through out the scene.
Very well composition, good presentation, also soft colours.
Very well done, TFS.

Have a nice day,
John.

brevbrev14 (372) 2009-03-05 14:16