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°°Waiting for you..°°
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Copyright: Melinda Temesi (temmel) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 172 W: 78 N: 457] (2474)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-06
Categories: Daily Life, Decisive Moment
Camera: Pentax K100D, Pentax SMC-F 1:4-5.6 35-80mm
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-26 1:39
Viewed: 404
Points: 17
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
I dedicate this shot for all members who will come to d Budapest TE meeting this weekend..

I'm waiting to meet you:)
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Hi Melinda,

Fine composition and amazing sensual atmosphere.
Regards.

Ha ha ha ha
We are commmmiiiing !!!
After you wil say"finaly free :)))"""
I cant wait to meet you all there too :)
The waiting mood is very expressive here
Hugs

Hi Melinda
yes, we are coming :)
will be a great meeting for sure :D
Have you tride a slight other framing with the model on the right part so she would have more space where she is looking at.
regards,didier

Hi Melinda!
Just bought my Bus-ticket from Vienna Airport to Budapest - so I think you can´t yet see me on the horizon...
Very nice photo, funny how the stripes on the wall are continued in the shirt!
Regards, and looking forward to be meeting you, Johannes

Hallo Melinda,
ein Selbstportrait ? Das Licht ist super, die leichte Überbelichtung passt genau für dieses helle Sommerthema :)
Ich würde die Person etwas mehr nach rechts rücken, damit der Blick etwas mehr "Platz hat".

Freu mich schon sehr, GLG Christian

Hello Linda, so there will be a romanian meeting in Hungary?:D cool!!
I like that the picture fits the theme. She really looks like she's waiting for someone, just like you!
I think Didier's suggestion is good. Cropping the right part would get rid of the burnt out area that kind of scratches the eye and it makes the left part look larger...
best regards,
Marc

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  • japiey Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1822 W: 331 N: 2577] (9337)
  • [2008-06-26 10:29]

Hi Lin,

Good welcome shot for the GIANTS :)
Excellent choice of B/W.
mY wIsHeS fOr ThE meeting.

I hope I can see some amazing works too ;) after the meet...

Take care, smile to the members..

jp

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  • Jeppo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 744 W: 2 N: 716] (5613)
  • [2008-06-27 4:34]

Ciao Linda,

nice shot. good dedication
have a nice time together!

ciao
Silvio

It looks like a fashion advertisement , really appealing and makes me wonder how a coloured version had been able to work here as i glimpse nice lights and shapes on that photo spot and some certain graphical approach given by the stripes of that t-shirt and also in the pose or cool attitude that girl keeps ...

Nice to meet you again Linda . Good luck with your exams as i told you before and also a perfect weekend for you and all the TE bunch ...If some of them have never been to Budapest they will be struck by its beautiness and charm ...Envying your luck (i wish i could stay there and also join the group )

Citadel at the blue hour when the city begins to shine with lights is something nearly orgasmic

All the best ,

Puszi ,

Miguel

Nagyon kedves kép, tökéletesen illik a "várakozó" hangulathoz. Nagyon köszönjük a szervezést, remekül éreztem magam!
(Itt is kitolhattad volna a hölgyet a jobb szélre.)

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