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winter sleep...


winter sleep...
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Copyright: Melinda Temesi (temmel) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 172 W: 78 N: 457] (2476)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2008-01-26
Categories: Nature
Camera: Pentax K100D, Pentax SMC DA 18-55mm
Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
Theme(s): Balaton, your favourites [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-01-28 3:59
Viewed: 655
Favorites: 1 [view]
Points: 24
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
winter on Lake Balaton,
slowly awakes from it’s winter sleep.


"Winter sunshine
Bring me on
It’s hard to define
What’s gone?
Buried under
The lonesome past
Thoughts asunder
Feelings so vast

Gone summer tone
The trees of green
Standing now alone
Barren and preen
Rise and each fall
From where it came from
Winter’s long squall
Darker climate strum

Rain in the clouds
Breeze in the aside
Raincoat waling crowds
Through dark slide
The ivory icy cast
Northern ashes cold
Many ways contrast
Now through unfold

Winter sunshine
Bring me on
Tangling and entwine
Through the pawn
Winter Sunshine
Brash ice embossed
Golden shine alpine
Hours of the frost"

/Peter S. Quinn /



in d Workshop
my faithful dogs..while im taking shots:)

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Szia Melinda!
Gyönyörű hangulat, olyan mint egy impresszionista festmény! A színek, a fények és a tükröződés a vízfelszínen fantasztikus. Nagyszerű fotó hazánk szépségeiről, Gratulálok! Szép hetet kívánok!
Gyuri

beautiful colors and great reflection.

It is a surrealistic landscape, the colours, the stripes of the planes. Yesit resembles me Some paintings of Dalí from his aeteric religious era, this endless ice feeling is the connection point for me.
If I did not realize the silhouette of the Badachonyi (I hope I did not made a mistake in the spelling) I would thought it is from Iceland. Many TFS, Jalab

Burried under the lonesome past...
Another magical image from winter....
Salutes for this excellence.
All the best, Lin.

jean paul

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  • miumiu Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 644 W: 1 N: 241] (3816)
  • [2008-01-28 12:32]

Szia Linda!
Űűű...de különleges!
Gyönyörű fotó, varázslatos színekkel! Még sosem láttam a Balatont télen... nagyon szép!
Ági

hello Melinda,
a beautiful visual of the lake in winter
in the ideal moment of light, color and games of reflections...well done

ciao sERGIO

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  • jorgi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 781 W: 124 N: 546] (2469)
  • [2008-02-09 0:44]

Hi Melinda,

this shot is overwhelming. What a magnificent scenery of repeated sky and airplane lines. Composition with small detail of foreground is excellent with great sense of vastness of this waterscape. Colours are to dive into and seeing this one wants to be able to grow some wings and fly over this beauty. Excellent!

Kind regards,
Jeri

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  • konok Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 227 W: 0 N: 119] (1979)
  • [2008-02-13 16:54]

Hű, ez fantasztikus! Mintha az Északi sarkkörön túl lennénk valahol. Szokatlan és ezért érdekes, friss kompozíció, gyönyörű színekkel.
Köszi!
Jani

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  • daddo Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1721 W: 29 N: 1803] (8103)
  • [2008-02-17 14:57]

Hi Melinda. Quite a wonderful scene- one could imagine that it was from another planet- a planet of ice and mysterious lights. Lovely colours and superb contrast between the foreground's sharp details and the misty distance. Regards. Klaudio.

Linda, cette lumičre d'hiver est sublime sur ce paysage d'air et d'eau. Les couleurs et le graphisme en font une trčs belle photo.
Jacques

Szia Linda,
Gyönyörű téli kép, és ha nem tudnám, hol készült, valóban Izlandra gondolnék először. :) A színvilág pazar, igazi téli, pont annyira telítettek a színek, amennyire kell. A Balaton egy olyan arcát mutatod be, amit nem vagy csak kevésbé ismerünk.
Csodálatos kép, joggal lehetsz rá büszke. Be is jelölöm kedvencemnek - nálam 10-ből 10.
Legjobbakat, üdv Laci

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  • gmg Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 178 W: 77 N: 88] (1463)
  • [2008-05-11 2:30]

Szia Melinda!
Superb shot with this colors and reflections and the exact feeling of a cold winter awakening.
TFS
gmg

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