Photographer’s Note
I was thinking about the title of this shot. There were some ideas:
Music of the spheres; to emphasize the similarity to the night skies, and the rythm of the light patches.
Kandinsky - Bauhaus era; to emphasize the similarity to the painting of Kandinsky when he was a theoretic of world famed Bauhaus school
Dancing frozen bubbles - life and death. I chose this natural - poetic one because this photo was taken in the Dead Tisza (a little lake at Szolnok, once part of the second largest river of Hungary). It is an extremely immanent part of the city. the inhabitants really like the Dead Tisza to fish, to sport, to relax.
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johnfreeman
(2220) 2008-01-04 9:21
Hi Jalab,
I like this effect very much, the bubbles really do look as though they are dancing and have been frozen to make an abstract painting.
Just my own subjective feeling but perhaps you could have increased the contrast and sharpness slightly? There are some hazy grey areas which I find a bit distracting, particularly in the centre of the picture.
Anyway, very well done!
Regards
John
jordimur (22) 2008-01-04 10:20
I like the photos that just freeze a moment and translate it into something like this... you can imagine anything!
chiaretta
(1909) 2008-02-12 4:10
Your note are always special.
Thi shot is all graphism... And I like it. I don't Know if the grain is wanted... but I think that added much charme to the composition.
Chiaretta
Photo Information
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Copyright: jalab temen (jalab_temen)
(1943) - Genre: Places
- Medium: Black & White
- Date Taken: 2008-01-01
- Categories: Nature
- Exposure: f/3.3, 1/125 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version
- Date Submitted: 2008-01-04 6:22








