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Copyright: jalab temen (jalab_temen) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 228 W: 2 N: 122] (716)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2008-05
Categories: Daily Life
Exposure: f/3.3, 1/680 seconds
More Photo Info: [view]
Photo Version: Original Version
Theme(s): NB - NoirBlanc [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2008-05-15 5:32
Viewed: 251
Points: 20
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
In Hatvan, I have to wait about one hour for the train in the afternoon, so I took some photos, here is the first piece of this serie.

I would like to show you the boring, inert waiting at this barren industrial place.

I chose BW to emphasize that certain feeling and the contrast of the stock-still air and the hiperactive children.

And to be honest while I took these photos I was thinking on a blues. So for me these photos are blues illustrations in a way.
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Hi Jalab,
thank you so much for your nice words on my last photo.. i've found a chance to discover your gallery. long shadows and the light give great effect, and there is a nice graphical effect with the bench.. i like the shadows of legs of children:)
Compliments,
ReLa

There is a lovely mood about this photo and from my experience waiting for trains you have captured the moment perfectly. The late afternoon sun and the shadows are simply gorgeous. Regards from UK, TW

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  • ninaL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1766 W: 222 N: 1845] (15305)
  • [2008-05-15 12:45]

Hi, Jalab.
I like it a lot.
This a true photography...
A scene which tells a story we can imagine.
Beautiful light and shadows.
I think I would juste like crop a little on the top, to don't see the sky.
Best regards. Grazyna.

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  • jorgi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 724 W: 122 N: 490] (2231)
  • [2008-05-16 0:40]

Hi Jalab,

when light is just right even most industrial or dull environments glow and show their beauty. This image is all about light which gives marvelous graphical output due to sharp and exact shadows. BW conversion works very well and you managed to create that feeling of watching toward the sun and seeing almost nothing but silhuettes. Beautifully captured ambient and mood.

Kind regards,
Jeri

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  • burGu Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 202 W: 21 N: 308] (1537)
  • [2008-05-16 4:23]

Hi Jalab,
Your patience for the train and assessing this period by photographing is really admirable :)
B&W is absolutely right choice for emphasizing children silhouettes and shadows with the light on bench.
Best wishes,
Burcu

Hi Jalab.
A wonderful B&W with this portait of two children waiting for the train.
Nice backlight with extreme high lights.
Well done.
Best regards.
Bobo.

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  • Csilla Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 268 W: 0 N: 180] (1525)
  • [2008-05-18 20:14]

Szia Jalab!
Nagyon kedves foto a vonatvaro fiucskakrol. Anno, mi is hasonlokepp izgatottan lestuk, mikor jon mar!! Tetszenek a fenyek, de foleg az arnyekok, kulonoskepp a lelogo labake. :)
Udv, Csilla

Hi Jalab!
Good work, great effect!
Regards
Artur

hello Jalab

nice shot of a feeling , BW is good for that , it's outer of time picture
TFS
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Dominic

The children seems counting the number of wagons passing by. Good effort of capturing this scene with harsh lights and it turned to be brilliant shot.

Hi Jalab, very nice this contra light
i like the moment captured and the tone conversion
good choice
ciao!
Valeria

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