an old store in Naxos
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mathiasmo (1759) 2003-11-18 12:42
I think that there are lots of excelent subjects to shot at this place. But I also think that this picture, by itself, doesn't work at all. It's out of focus, and there are so many things in there that's difficult to actually see interesting points. Hope to see more from this place. Regards.
nightowl (0) 2003-11-18 12:55
A "crowded" shop, yet with the providential help of a witch broom, you put order into the composition!
Dynamic lines, a superb diagonal, and a well balanced framing/cropping.
Superb textures and natural colours.
It lacks a bit of sharpness, but a touch of unsharp mask (USM) could improve this.
Two minor details: the white (unidentified) object hanging at the top is a bit distracting, and the sign on the left is a little too bright, but the writing is still perfectly legible.
What an interesting little shop! I must be fun to explore...
Attractive presentation, easy to enjoy!
saitekx36 (54) 2003-11-18 14:50
Hi Janos ........
Nice photo .... But Ill crop a bit at the upper side, and of course pass it through Neat Image to get a sharper image. Look at the workshop to see what I mean
And tell me wht do u think ...
Porteplume (3416) 2003-11-19 16:03
Bonsoir Janos! I've looked at the four pictures you have set on TE. They are all four very attractive but it looks like you have a problem with the sharpness... Laughing all the time? Nervous? Forgotten your tripod? Too cold in Grece? ;o)))
This one has a good busy composition, a nice fitting framing, and natural colours, but the focus is a bit lost...
dominique (11414) 2003-12-01 16:27
slightly disorder but a pretty composition and a good framing, it is a good idea.
Edwin (188) 2004-03-02 8:33
Loved this store JŠnos and I also like your picture a lot. I think you had the entrance of the affair to your back, am I right? Perhaps a polarizer could have reduced some of the reflections. I posted a ws for you, without the TL light. The returning textures and colour toning of the baskets makes it a very appealing picture, and composition-wise the inclusion of the broom was a good choice, it works great as a pleasant diagonal interruption. Well seen! ;-)