This Pic was taken by the house i rented with a few friends..we had an amazing view!!!! The dog was the owner's one and enjoyed spending the whole day having a sunbath even there were almost 40°C!
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Emiel_Skyfreak (3002) 2006-12-07 4:42
Nice try, it seems indeed to be a nice scene. The POV is nice high. I like the diagonal stones in the front, nice depth is created, good leading thing for the eyes. But for a postcard I think there should be something corrected or other things present.
First, the horizon is a bit slanting.
Second, the sky takes up a lot of space, but unfortunatly has no nice cloud patterns to offer, or nice warm evening (sunset) colours. So less of the sky would be an idea.
Third, the focus on the dog (good positioned!)is not so strong, unfortunatly too.
Good luck with next shots.