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Long gone summer


Long gone summer
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Copyright: Thomas zeglis (syd1946) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3440 W: 67 N: 4647] (16583)
Genre: People
Medium: Black & White
Date Taken: 2007-07-17
Categories: Decisive Moment
Camera: Nikon D70s, AF NIKKOR 28-200 ED 3.5-5.6
Exposure: f/5.6, 1/400 seconds
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2007-10-05 6:31
Viewed: 1655
Points: 144
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
One more summer has passed and with it, all the feelings, all the dreams that we have made. Perhaps, this is its magic. The first cool breeze and the first raindrop, like another poem, are there to remind us, they are leading us to the exit…even this summer we did not change the world, love so afraid from the passions has vanished with the first gentle wind of August. The failure for one more time gives away the gloom to the unappreciated September. However, we are alive…and we will charm the dreams from the beginning. Hope will give us her light once more. Summer will be back again, warm and liberating. The sickly flower of August will water the thirsty earth and we will cut from the branch of the heart one beautiful deep red in order to give it to the person that we loved the most…maybe this time miraculously will accept it and preserve it in its soul eternally…like summer…

Thoughts from the diary of Happysad.


Τελείωσε ακόμη ένα καλοκαίρι. Μαζί με όλα τα συναισθήματα, τα όνειρα που έχουμε κάνει. Ίσως αυτή είναι η μαγεία του. Το δροσερό αεράκι μαζί με την πρώτη σταγόνα της βροχής, σαν άλλο ποίημα μας το υπενθυμίζουν, μας οδηγούν στην έξοδο…
Και αυτό το καλοκαίρι δεν αλλάξαμε τον κόσμο, η αγάπη φοβισμένη από τα πάθη χάθηκε με τα πρώτα μελτέμια του Αυγούστου. Η απογοήτευση για μια ακόμη φορά χαρίζει την μελαγχολία στον αδικημένο Σεπτέμβρη.
Και όμως ζούμε ακόμη…και θα μαγέψουμε τα όνειρα από την αρχή. Η ελπίδα σαν ηλιαχτίδα θα μας δώσει το φως της. Θα έρθει το καλοκαίρι ξανά, ζεστό και λυτρωτικό. Το μαραμένο λουλούδι του καλοκαιριού θα ποτίσει τη διψασμένη γη. Από το κλαδί της καρδιάς μας θα βγει ένα νέο, όμορφο και βαθυκόκκινο για να το δώσουμε στον άνθρωπο που αγαπήσαμε πιο πολύ…Ίσως, σαν από θαύμα αυτή την φορά να το δεχτεί, κρατώντας το ανέγγιχτο για πάντα στην ψυχή του…σαν καλοκαίρι…


Σκέψεις από το ημερολόγιο του Happysad.

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Hi Thomas, a poetic image... love the reflection!

Cheers
Alexander

Hello Thomas
Une belle image avec un bon PP W&B, j'aime bien la courbe des collines en arrière plan qui vient rappeler celle de la demoiselle.
Un bon travail plein de nostalgie...
Amicalement
Hervé

looks like "dance in the summer fields" -the same beach, mountains and she walks just like the other lady- but i like this one better thoma mou... may be because the girl's hair blowing in the wind soft and slow... so nice...

take care:)

korkut

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  • ifanik Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1676 W: 53 N: 2657] (15106)
  • [2007-10-05 7:15]

Geia soy Thoma
H poihtikh diathesh toy F8inoporoy se exei syneparei kai me tis fwtografies soy synepernei kai emas
Sygxarthria poly kalh kai opws panta kalo shmeiwma
Xairetw
Nikos

a Good construction,everythings is in the right place ,with a touch of poesy

Ciao Thomas i like this B&W.
The scene is magic and give a good feeling.

I think that is a really excellent composition.

Have a Good Week-end

CeccoPhoto!!

Hello Thomas,
Once again, a very good moment taken. She looks like walking on the water. Well seen and done.
Best regards,
Fabrice

Hi Thomas,

Great composition, I like the perfect summer atmosphere, with the girl under the sunlight. Nice soft background, excellent light and reflections.

Greetings
Leonor

Ακριβώς σαν το ξανθό κοριτσάκι στη φωτογραφία σου που απομακρύνεται, με το αεράκι να μπερδεύει τα μαλλιά της, το καλοκαιράκι έφυγε για μια ακόμη φορά παραχωρώντας την θέση του στο μελαγχολικό αλλά όμορφο φθινόπωρο.
Εξαιρετικά πετυχημένη η παρομοίωση σου πέτυχες ακριβώς αυτό που θέλεις να μας πεις, με μια εικόνα.
Εξαιρετικά ταιριαστό το σημείωμα σου απλά δίνει μια προέκταση στην σύνθεση σου.
Σου εύχομαι καλό Σαββατοκύριακο φίλε μου.
Κώστας

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  • partha Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1487 W: 85 N: 1298] (12964)
  • [2007-10-05 9:01]

Amazing shot. Wonderful place for relaxing. B&W is not a bad choice either.
Partha

Hello Thomas,
very nice feeling here and the title fits well your image and your feelings. Beautiful serene scenery this little girl walking along the sea shore, you seemed to capture her essence nicely, you handled her soft looking silhouette enforcing her dreamy look. Lovely composition and excellent light handling, congratulations on this timeless picture.
Kind Regards.
Stella

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  • carper Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 9622 W: 450 N: 15463] (54196)
  • [2007-10-05 9:21]

another good photo of your hand Thomas,
good memories, we had in the Netherlands a very bad summer weather. I like the black and white shot here, the pov is good and the balance is nice, good photojob, have a fine day.
gr. jaap

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  • Emile Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4087 W: 137 N: 4416] (16045)
  • [2007-10-05 10:37]

Hola Thomas.
If you crop the fg taking off the sand the beautiful girl would look like she is walking on the water, anyway your shot in B&W is very good. Well done. TFS.
Best regards.

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  • dip Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 1881 W: 0 N: 956] (9020)
  • [2007-10-05 11:00]

Geia sou Thoma,
apoxairetas to kalokairi me autin tin omorfi fotografia alla kai to kapos melagxoliko keimeno pou tin sunotheuei,afinei ena glukopikro sunaisthima,
emeis edo stin kentriki kai voreia Europi den noiothoume tetoia sunaisthimata otan feugei to kalokairi,afou den exoume ta mageutika Ellinika kalokairia,ouden kakon ameiges kalou :-)
Xairetismous kai kalo fthinoporo,
Dimitris.

Γειάσου Θωμά, έφυγε για να έρθει άλλο θα έλεγα τουλάχιστον το ίδιο όμορφο.
Όμορφη εικόνα με πολύ καλό συμβολισμό.
Βαγγέλης

Thomas,
a good summerish scene,a pleasant summerish light and a well captured shot,nice in B&W,well contrasted,too and Thanks,
Best Wishes
M

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  • TopGeo Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2060 W: 79 N: 2766] (12665)
  • [2007-10-05 12:13]

Γειά σου Θωμά
Κρατώ το τέλος από το σημείωμά σου
..κρατώντας το ανέγγιχτο γιά πάντα στην ψυχή του.. λέει "Σάν Καλοκαίρι" Λέει 'Σαν' Γιαυτό πρέπει να ζούμε 'Σαν Καλοκαίρι'
Απίθανη η στιγμή του "κάθε αποχωρισμού"(-:
αύριο

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  • UlfE Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1472 W: 18 N: 1492] (5959)
  • [2007-10-05 12:34]

Hi Thomas,

Wonderful shot. I really like the feeling of motion created by the splash in the water and that the girl is captured when taking a step. Excellent sharpness and really good poetic note. Have a nice week end!

Cheers,

Ulf

Hi Thomas,

Nice photo! The b/w here makes the image more thought provoking. The composition is right on! well done.

Hello Thomas.

This goes beyond the boundaries of reality, to a fantasy....walk away from the shores...!!

summer has its sensible portrait here, in this walk. beautifull !!

jeam paul

Hello Thomas.
Your note gives the most wonderful feeling to this photo, after reading it and looking at the photo we might see what you say on the note, the cool breeze on her hair lifting it so softly but saying us that the hot temperatures of august are ending and that the summer joy is now leaving space to the melancholic mood of autumn. Another kind of mood where persons seem to be not so happy but if we face it with the same spirit as we do in summer then it can be equally enjoyable.
Your pp with soft tones is again a winner as this photo imo will only work with this kind of tones otherwise it would look too depressive.
Cheers.
Paulo

It is a great composition with the girl going to exit the frame and … summer. The idea was superb and matches very well the note. The B&W was another excellent option as it retrieves the summer colours from our minds. Well done.
Antonio

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  • ninaL Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1800 W: 244 N: 1901] (15891)
  • [2007-10-06 3:53]

Hi, Syd...
I prefer not critique this one for the while...
I don't know...there is something but not enough in my opinion...
Too weak...I miss something...but I don't why...so, I will think about it and maybe I will back...
-----
I am back. The girl is very nice and the composition is good... I think she deserves a big smile :)
Best regards. Grazyna.

Hi Thomas,
Fascinating impression, I like the idea and the fine realization, really creative work. Composition is expressive, effective choice the B&W. Beautiful elegy, Well done! Have a nice weekend
George

Hi Thomas
nice cropping on this little girl walking on the beach.
The vertical frame give us the reflection.
Well done
Bertrand

Kalimera Thomas,
summer from childhood, before we had colour film, that's what I think of here. Loooong time ago. Good clarity, nice waterdrops around her feet. As she is leaving the capture I would like her more at the right here.
Lieben Gruss, Ulf

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  • Gerrit Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4287 W: 87 N: 5264] (25510)
  • [2007-10-06 12:28]

Hi Thomas,
great compo, dreamy atmosphere.
Regards, gerrit

Hi dear Thomas,
Wonderfull b&w job ! Great pov and really very poetic compo. The noise reminds me to the b&w works of H.C.Bresson's post war products.
Very nice shot.
TFS and hava e nice weekend
Best regards
MESUT ILGIM

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  • faubry Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3588 W: 353 N: 4307] (28047)
  • [2007-10-06 16:51]

bonsoir Tomas, simple composition, like a dream here, this little girl seems to go away ou the frame... i like youy bW choice
soon
francine

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  • flory Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 847 W: 23 N: 985] (4555)
  • [2007-10-06 22:58]

hi Thomas,
'morning found as calmy unaware
noon burned gold into our hair
at night we swam the laughing sea
when summers's gone,where will we be..'
a poetic image and seems like a 'Lady of summer',walking softly..
wish you a creative Sunday!
Flory;)

Hehehe,
Get used to the autumn idea file mou. Accept the fact that the summer is gone, and it is again trapped in our monchromatic dreams till next year. What can be done? No way :))

Btw, it is a nice peeping photo :))))
Ta leme,
Deniz

Bonjour, mon ami Thomas,
Pas besoin de long discours pour apprécier cette composition. De plus, la note d'accompagnement est parfaitement adaptée à cette prise de vue.
Un grand bravo pour cette originalité.
Amitiés.
Philippe

Hi Thomas
An interesting choice of black and white. The girl is well placed in the frame. Another unique image.
Best wishes
Mark

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  • jasmis Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2906 W: 618 N: 3201] (38987)
  • [2007-10-07 8:16]

Romantic, no doubt. This girl seems to fly over the water.
B&W - interesting and creative choice.
Regards!

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  • clnaef Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 893 W: 77 N: 400] (6035)
  • [2007-10-07 11:01]

Bonjour,
Sympathique cadrage bien mis en évidence par le noir et blanc.
Bonne journée.
clnaef

Hi Thomas,
your composition is very simple and has a poetic touch, almost nostalgic of the summer that now is finished.
Perhaps this feeling we can notice it in the image of this girl taking the last bath in the sea from this season.
I like the light, the reflections and background very stumped.
Nice work, my friend.
Best regards,
Josep

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  • Tue Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5227 W: 56 N: 7448] (23801)
  • [2007-10-07 11:39]

Hej Thomas,
A very good photo that looks back on the summer that has passed. The lady walking into the sea is well placed in the composition and I like to see her reflection only partly in the water. The choice for B&W was good too. Well done!
Regards,
Lars

mono pioitika an to paris eine ena megalio ..fantasoy allios..!!!!

epenous vevea

nf

Hello Thomas,

beautiful thoughts into your note, I appreciate it and your idea.

The photo is good and sad in its B&W, it need of your note in order to live even the reflection and the small waves are nice other than the woman of course.

Compliments.

Have a nice week
Ciao
Vinicio

Hi Thomas.

Yeah...the summer is gone and we (just me at least) hope it to be back... :P

Excellent way to express your pity with the girl walking far...

Rgs, Oscar

Iassou Thomas
The 'nostalgic' title fits well to the image with the girl walking away and kind of representing the summer which is gone...Pleasant light, good choice of B&W version and vertical framing.
Cheers
Marilyn

The girl walking away symbolises the lost summer. I like how the fast shutter has frozen the splashes from her feet and her reflection in the wet sand at the water's edge.
Kath

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  • toto Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2468 W: 107 N: 2700] (14249)
  • [2007-10-08 4:03]

Belle photo de cette jeune femme qui se promène sur la plage les pieds dans l' eau.Jolies éclaboussure que son pas a provoqué en marchant.Beau NB. Amitiés Thomas

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  • chc Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 348 W: 33 N: 145] (1468)
  • [2007-10-08 5:03]

The way you stick the main character on the left allows the photograph to question "time". May be, in that perspective, the girl would have gained too be less neat (I think, but I may be wrong!). Here, the difference with "Dance in the Summer Fields" is noticeable.
christophe

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  • drago Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 585 W: 180 N: 796] (4738)
  • [2007-10-08 5:03]

Sad but true!Μπράβο Θωμά,για μια ακόμα φορά "τσιγκλάς" τα συναισθηματά μας..
Παναγιώτης

phwaaaaarrr. I mean, bet that was a hot day Thomas. Love the note. Although I love the summer I like all of the seasons for different reasons. Nice one.
br
mark

Ακόμα μια εξαιρετική ποιητική φωτογραφία με το ανάλογο εξαίρετο σημείωμα! Σταθερή αξία.

Kalispera Thoma,
A beautiful and balanced b/w this is, yet again brought alive by the poetic words from the diary. The reflection stays... an echo. Very good work!
Have a nice week.
Bert

Hi Thomas,
I like this picture especially in connection with the fine considerations in the note.
I only wonder why you choose here for Black & White?
Groet Rob

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  • Graal Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4891 W: 121 N: 487] (43121)
  • [2007-10-09 0:41]

Hi Thomas,
pleasant summer view, fine vertical composition with reflection. Simply and nice. I like it.
Gr., Aleksander

Hi Thomas,
Very good symbolism of a fading summer season with the girl walking away in her summer clothes. Well seen and captured. Well composed and good tones. Well done! tfs
Cheers,
Renier

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  • hdl Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1813 W: 13 N: 1543] (6268)
  • [2007-10-09 4:50]

I hope summer gets back soon... and that we have a good one here in Belgium too because this year wasn't very interesting. Let's say that it was hard to compare with the wheather in Greece (I base myself on your picture). The idea for the picture is clear and the decentralisation of the womam works fine. Choice for b/w is good too.

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  • john_c Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4906 W: 53 N: 5951] (24616)
  • [2007-10-09 6:52]

Hi Thomas,
The photo captures the theme of your note very well. What could be more enchanting - a lonely walk on the beach, a girl, the hills fading like the summer into the distance. The B&W format is effective and I like the subtle reflections. Have a good week...later.
John

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  • danos Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3515 W: 83 N: 5036] (19338)
  • [2007-10-09 8:40]

Θωμά καλησπέρα,
οι σκέψεις σου νομίζω είναι λίγο απαισιόδοξες ειδικά για τον αδικημένο Σεπτέμβριο.Για το Οκτώβρη δεν λες τίποτα,τον παρέλειψες εντελώς.Γι'αυτό και εγώ αύριο, σε αντίθεση με τα λεγόμενά σου, θα πάω στην όμορφη Μήλο για ένα τετραήμερο μαζί με άλλους φίλους.Η φωτογραφία σου ωραία σε ασπρόμαυρη έκδοση με την μικρή ξανθιά θεά να πηγαίνει να δροσισθεί μετά το άγος των εξετάσεων του σχολείου.Πολύ καλό και το σημείωμά σου.

Καλό Σαββατοκύρικο,Δάνος

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  • Cricri Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4499 W: 229 N: 6162] (29609)
  • [2007-10-09 8:57]

Hi Thomas,
petit côté " nostalgie donner par le N/B, jolie scéne, reflet et lumiére, beau cadrage et compo
Have a nice evening
cricri

Yasu Thomas,
Wonderful capture in b&w and superb reflections on the sea. I like it. Se xereto. Salvator.

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  • siolaw Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3991 W: 403 N: 6676] (22701)
  • [2007-10-10 0:23]

Iassou Thomas,
An image that is a little similar to a previous one, closer up though.. the B&W is reminiscent of the 'good old days', girl well placed for a good composition
Laurent

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  • jhm Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 12701 W: 272 N: 16936] (67790)
  • [2007-10-10 2:14]

Hello Thomas,

The summer in Belgium was very bad, maybe you took this picture in BW as compensation!
I'm no fan of BW, but the reflection and the subject are very good. Thanks for sharing.

Best regards,
John.

Γεια σου Θωμά!

Υπέροχη και πολύ ιδιαίτερη, όπως πάντα η συνεισφορά σου στο site. Οι φωτογραφίες σου έχουν πάντα μια γλυκιά μελαγχολία, και ένα ρομαντικό, αλλά όχι μελό "βλέμμα", που δε θα πάψει ποτέ να μας συγκινεί. Συγχαρητήρια!

Ηρακλής

Gia su Thoma!
Meta tin ekdromi sta politika zitimata vlepo epestrepses – esto gia ligo – stis kalokerines anamnisis. Logo tis genisis tis koris mu, mu fenete, les ke echun mesolavisi eones apo to telefteo kalokeri. Na lipon pu afti i omorfi, gliko-melancholiki fotografia to epanefere sto mialo mu. Mu aresi edo, anevases mia fotografia i opia xefevgi orea apo to tetrimeno stil par´olo pu kinite ston klassika elliniko thematiko choro “thalassa-magio-paralia”.

Chereto
Andreas

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  • atus Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2287 W: 205 N: 4455] (14907)
  • [2007-10-11 16:36]

Hi Thomas,
very well captured and nicely framed shot in a well chosen vertical format. The contrast is very good and the b/w version enhances the melancholic atmosphere of this nice pic. Very good one, my friend! Tfs and best wishes.
Attila

Hi Thomas. You are pushing the envelope of B&W here again. Good composition with emotion caused by the unexpected lack of colour on the beach. Good work. TFS. Murray.
PS Coming to Athens next march to see some of your great places that you have introduced.

Hi Thomas
Very well choosen the black and white for this summer picture. We are close the winter and the weather is cold.
Excellent quality, very nice reflections
TFS and have a nice week
Aires

Hello Thomas,
What a pleasant way to say goodbye to summer!
A very attractive frame... well done!
Greetings,
Pablo -

Good choice of black and white, Th girl is well palced in the image, well done.
Regards

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  • ChrisJ Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 8765 W: 923 N: 11773] (57261)
  • [2007-10-29 2:48]

Hi Thomas

Good b&w shot, of this attractive woman sunbather. It is starting to get colder, & summer is just a memory. Excellent sharpness & tonal range. Tfs!

Hi Thomas,
Well taken to have an well balanced composition, B&W or colours, its an interesting and plaesant shot.

Kalimera Thomas
Nice shot!A very good composition and reflections.
Excellent B/W work and POV here.
TFS/Regards

Kalimera Thomas
Composition, contrast, reflection and lightness are very excellent in this photograph.
Congratulations
Best wishes from Ankara
Gursel

Hi Thomas. I guess that summer is your favourite season. Not sure though. But the shot with a nice title seems to suggest that. Liked your presentation especially the gaits of the swimmer with splashes and ripples caused by her footsteps. Accompanying note is very communicative. Regards.
Partha

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  • Stepan Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 5129 W: 94 N: 3976] (26165)
  • [2008-01-10 13:19]

She seems to be floating over the water. Strange and moody, as often in your gallery.
Stéphane

Hi Thomas,
After reading your excellent note it looks like as if she is stepping into a poetic world.The faded hill and the short reflection are the other elements making the composition more impressive.
regards
Debabrata

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  • foozi Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 260 W: 0 N: 292] (1484)
  • [2008-07-16 18:37]

Hello Thomas,
nice splashing and great waves
great reflection and of distance fathom
cool wind and draping hairs
petit shadows in and great light out
winter spring fall or summer
the beauty is in the eyes of the beholders.

A lovely capture,

Regards,
Foozi

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