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• kensimage (7217)
• [2008-02-17 15:09]

Nice atmosphere, Tomasz. The woman is in an island of light in the darkness, but it's not warm light, it's cold and stark from the long fluorescent bulb above. I like the graininess and the way you placed the diagonal lines on the floor in the frame. Regards, Ken.

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• swavek (123)
• [2008-02-17 17:13]

Hey Tomasz, cool pic, nice composition and i really like this line on the floor which goes stright up to this chick. to me the story is happening somewhere inside a power plant or kind of restricted area... people here dont talk, they just walk along the lines..... Good work, man. take care

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• Dpbours (7412)
• [2008-02-18 0:56]
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Hi tomasz,

Very nice take. I like how you played with the light and took it there just off center. Berlin's library?! I was expecting it to be some dressing room of a swimming pool. :-)
I did add a workshop to focus it even a bit more on the light and to get rid of the person to the left. Hope you like it!

Greetings,
Dennis

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• totoamoto (1456)
• [2008-02-18 1:25]

Salut Tomasz
J'aime bien ce genre de photos.. Un genre particulier pour un résultat parfait.. Le noir et blanc est super.. Avec ce flou et ce grain.. ça donne toute la beauté de ta photo..
Photo intrigante..
Bravo
Cyril
:)