The chains on your wrists cut into your skin, blood dripped down your arms but you didn't mind, this pain was nothing compared to the chains that seemed to have constricted themselves around your heart. You felt nothing but utter lonliness.
It had been a week since you had arrived at Kuronue's castle but it felt more like an eternity. You had long since given up on any hope that someone would rescue you.
You missed your freedom dearly but you had finally come to the conclusion that freedom wasn't the only thing you missed.
You missed waking up feeling completley safe.
You missed waking up to Yoko with his arms around you.
You missed walking into the kitchen and hearing Kurama humming soft ningen lullabies.
You missed them.
After the third day of torture a block of ice had formed its way around your heart and it showed no signs of melting.
Kuronue, your nose twitched at the sound of his name uttered in your mind. You hated him with every fiber of your being. He would do nothing but put you down all day, try and force you into lolita costumes, and to adhere to his 'needs'.
The thought of being with him made your stomach curl in disgust. His daily beatings had taken a toll on your body but you dodn't mind. Sopmetimes you told yourself it would be better if you died. You wouldn't have to look at that discusting man any longer.
You remembered when he had found your mating mark, you still mad marks from that lashing.
You shifted your body against the cold wall and the deep cuts on your back stung as you slid them across it.
You hung your head low as you heard the door to the dungeon open. It was the signal of a new day, which meant more ridiculing and being beaten until an inch of your life.
Light filtered over your body as your cell door opened. You didn't have to look up to see who it was.
"Captured freedom" by Brigitte Fox
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Moyano (163) 2008-02-20 10:51
Freedom in the windows, a wish...great shot, graphic. Interesting note, thanks for sharing :)
cessy (13647) 2008-02-20 10:56
very nice low angle, great patterns and colors
leo61 (0) 2008-02-20 11:01
A great one!
The reflections at these windows are great and i like the contrast between the old facade and the modern windows.A good architecture job and a great photojob .I like too the perspective and the contrast between red and blue.
manada (6239) 2008-02-20 11:03
Merhaba Deniz bey
excellent compo, windows perfectly placed and nicest reflections.
Each glass is a little painting.
Very nice modulation of colours,contrast and details. Bravo
bostankorkulugu (41972) 2008-02-20 11:12
yağmur yağsaydı, seller aksaydı, arap kızı camdan baksaydı... da simetri kırılsaydı biraz>:P... gökyüzü binaya hapsolmuş gibi sanki ne güzel...
dkeus31 (27735) 2008-02-20 11:20
a nice graphical shot with all these repetitve squares well contrasting to the red stones.
xavshot (69835) 2008-02-20 12:10
une photo que j'apprécie : superbe graphisme et bon choix de cadrage avec ces répétitions et ces différentes tailles des formes. Belle perspective. Bien joué.
baclama (17391) 2008-02-20 12:36
une tres belle composition,tres bon choix e l'angle de prise...les couleurs et les motifs donnent une repetition infinie...
bracasha75 (24517) 2008-02-20 14:08
Great idea and i like your way of thinking...
It is not always meter what kind of camera you have alredy how you think
doubay (2093) 2008-02-20 14:17
Who the hell is Brigitte Fox (When I googled the name I found an American soccer player)? And what for a weird text of her did you put in your note? Did this facade really arouse such feelings in you?! When we were standing in front of it together I didn’t have the impression that you had such deep going thoughts about freedom and stuff like that.
Nice shot btw, which accentuates the symmetry of the façade very effectively. I think though that there is missing some disturbing element.
TopGeo (38192) 2008-02-20 14:56
Beautiful compostion and wonderful reflection! Excellent lighting on that windows in that time of the day. good idea and nice done!
Wandering_Dan (3449) 2008-02-20 15:16
Hello, Deniz -
Very unusual shot, nicely balanced in all its parts. The sky reflections are great. The solid state aspect comes across very well, but I'm not so sure about the freedom part.
dokadak (11518) 2008-02-20 15:28
Kadraji cm cinsinden mi yoksa fit olarak mi hesap ettun? :) yansimasi, kadraji ile guzel bir paylasim...
burGu (4840) 2008-02-20 22:19
Su goruntuyu elde etmek icin nasil bir durus sergiledigini merak ediyorum. Oyle ki ustune basip yuruyesim, camlardan zip zip ziplayasim geldi. Camlardaki yansimalara bakip kendimi ucuyor falan sanirdim herhalde.
Notun girisinden cok etkilendim, ama durust davranmak gerekirse sanirim sabah sabah devamini anlamakta zorlandim. Kendime not; gun icinde tekrar oku... :)
alibasarir (15580) 2008-02-21 0:47
merhaba deniz bey
göze çok hoş gelen estetik ve simetrisi mükemmel nefis bir kare.detaylar son derece belirgin ayrıca ışık,netlik ve keskinlik harika.gerçekten bakış açısı ile birlikte farklı ve nefis bir görüntü olmuş elinize sağlık.
barrufeto_77 (28876) 2008-02-21 1:57
Nice patterned picture! I only miss something to break it...
gokanlam (6605) 2008-02-21 8:50
Ne kadar net ve duzgun bir kare! bakiyorum bakiyorum sagi solu alti ustu heryeri bir simetri ve duzgunluk icinde.. Isik, netlik, keskinlik ve renkler muhtesem..pencerelerdeki gokyuzu ise cok can alici.. Not ise tamamen butunlesiyor (her zamanki gibi)
vincz (19113) 2008-02-21 9:25
Superb geometrical compsotion. POV is excellent sky reflections in the windows excellent. You have a great eye!
faubry (35405) 2008-02-21 10:36
hello Deniz, very good perspective with all windows here...very graphic shot, good note also, bravo
devimeuxbe (58557) 2008-02-21 14:01
The graphism is beautifull on this picture. I like your POV
AiresSantos (56155) 2008-02-22 0:50
Great POV, wonderful graphism and colours.
I like your note and the reflections
TFS and have a nice weekend
Merline (0) 2008-02-22 17:47
superb graphism, I love this. Also the pov very close to the wall makes it look bigger I guess, it's clean and neat and sharp as a razor. The reflections in the windows have a wonderful blue/green tonality. I get a bit of a science-fi feeling although it's not that.:-).
Now, I like the text but not specially with the picture...although there is reference to cold walls for me it's two separate things here...it induces a mood I do not see in the picture.
TFS, enjoy the weekend!
Kind regards, Michèle
jonathan_hart (21274) 2008-02-23 3:10
eye catching graphism and contrasted colours, efficient composition
Photo65Net (43120) 2008-02-26 1:18
Wow, superb image !
Again you show your great eye, in this amazing compo, an image I'd have love to take !
AyseGurel (574) 2008-02-26 7:21
kuşlar gibi uçmadan da bulutlara dokunulabilinir...ve bu fotograf bunun güzel bir örneğidir..
Stepan (27210) 2008-03-02 23:02
I really do enjoy your title ! It's simply excellent and inspired and turned the compo into a master one. Very well done.
- Copyright: Deniz Taskin (rigoletto) (34229)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2007-06-23
- Categories: Architecture
- Camera: Canon EOS 400D, Canon 18-55 mm
- Exposure: f/7.1, 1/320 seconds
- More Photo Info: view
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2008-02-20 10:46