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Ocean
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Copyright: Adrian Wrobel (AdrianWrobel) Silver Star Critiquer [C: 20 W: 3 N: 0] (178)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006
Categories: Daily Life
Camera: FujiFilm FinePix S7000, FUJINON SUPER-EBC
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2008-06-30 22:47
Viewed: 301
Points: 7
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  • CMJC Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 348 W: 39 N: 120] (1664)
  • [2008-06-30 23:56]

no point day today and peace theme
you are right on!

Hey Adrian,
I like the tones in your pictures. I would suggest a different crop though: less empty space on the right-hand side and more above the woman's head to give some 'breathing' space. Maybe by moving slightly to the left...Or else why not try (next time?) a vertical framing so as to capture the whole reflection? Some notes would be great as well...

yours,

Philippe

Five BEAUTIFUL (natural ELEMENT) of our nature,romantic and warm colours,
excellent frame, bravo adrian.

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  • SELU Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 51 W: 35 N: 94] (482)
  • [2008-07-01 8:03]

HI ADRIAN,
THE WOMAN IS TRANSPORT PEACE, THE LOW LIGHT IS CORRECT. YOU HAVE WRITE THE NOTES FOR HELP TO PICTURE. A GREETING.

this is realy very nice pic i have no words to praise

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