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Photographie réalisée avec un appareil numerique sur trépied pour des essais en mode manuel...
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CedarBough
![Gold Star Critiquer [C: 380 W: 0 N: 9]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-n-n.gif){kind=small}
(74) 2003-05-04 8:49
straighten this shot.
and next time, try to not place the subject in the middle of the frame, it's static and uninteresting. The shot is like four stripes... sand, wave, water, sky.
BobTrips
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 555 W: 343 N: 74]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-g-g.gif){kind=small}
(1853) 2003-05-04 11:30
It's a good capture of a wave breaking.
The shot needs to be rotated to the right to flatten the horizon and would probably be improved by cropping off some of the top and bottom. (Worth a try.)
I downloaded, did the above and boosted contrast a bit. If you would like to see the results enable Workshop and send me an email.
rziya
![Silver Star Critiquer/Silver Note Writer [C: 44 W: 2 N: 11]](http://i1.trekearth.com/misc/s-n-s.gif){kind=small}
(531) 2003-05-04 11:30
I think the photo lacks a subject. As is the wave, the beach, the sea, the faraway mountains, the sky all are not interesting.
Photo Information
- Copyright: ludovic leze (valulath) (251)
- Genre: Places
- Medium: Color
- Date Taken: 2003-02-18
- Categories: Nature
- Camera: Canon PowerShot A40
- Exposure: f/4.8, 1/1000 seconds
- Details: Tripod: Yes
- Photo Version: Original Version, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2003-05-04 6:15
