Stairs II

Critiques [Translate]

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• eleparc (24014)
• [2004-04-27 5:06]

superb composition amos.. was it at the grand arch in la defense? this is a great view! maybe a little more sharp focus would enhance it further... ;-) great eye catch!

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• RGatward (19155)
• [2004-04-27 5:25]

An interesting compostion, and a surprisingly unusual subject, given how photogenic it is. Makes me think of Battleship Potempkin.

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• c_kyr (1810)
• [2004-04-27 6:52]

Very interesting composition.
The look of the people going up and down is very nice.
Well done!

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• ianmcall (1213)
• [2004-04-27 7:27]

Lovely lines and composition. What I like best here is that almost all the people are coming down the stairs and we can see them, but the two that are going up are on diagonals; the man is in the top left and the woman in the bottom right. Also the crowd at the bottom is nicely offset by th esingle figure at the top. This just works.

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• spence (2236)
• [2004-04-27 7:51]

Very original and effective shot Amos. The guy in the top left going against the crowd really strengthens the shot enormously. Very well seen.

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• Ebbe (9366)
• [2004-04-27 13:12]

A very fine composition made special by the single one going up. Is this the stairs at La Defense?

I think it should be sharpened a little more.

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• st-eos (137)
• [2004-05-03 19:22]

Like it a lot... abstract from a street scene. Lovely composition and well timed. I agree with Ebbe, maybe it could be sharpened a little more.

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• keribar (37675)
• [2005-05-18 6:16]

Salut Amos,

Tu as raison cette photo est tout-à-fait dans le même esprit que la mienne: ce que j'aime ici c'est que tu a su déclancher qu bon moment quand peu de gens se touchent, ils apparaissent un a un. Le fond unique de marches d'escaliers ajoute beaucoup a la composition .. Izzet Keribar