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Sailing chaos


Sailing chaos
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Copyright: Miguel Parra Jimenez (MiguelP) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2022 W: 60 N: 2937] (13105)
Genre: Places
Medium: Color
Date Taken: 2006-05-26
Categories: Transportation
Camera: Canon EOS 350D
Photo Version: Original Version
Date Submitted: 2006-07-09 15:56
Viewed: 615
Points: 17
[Note Guidelines] Photographer's Note
Getting ready to sail. During the Cannes film festival lots of boats arrive to the port and the coast in front of the Croissette, the street by the sea that becomes the most walked place in the city. Long ago I posted a photo similar to this one, and I remember a very interesting critic by Michael Gan. One of those you feel you have learn something. This photo is like a second try and I think I´ve corrected some of the mistakes he told me back then. Take care and enjoy summer.
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To Cretense: No te lo vas a creer...MiguelP 1 07-11 16:07
To bebel: Bonsoir PierrotMiguelP 2 07-10 02:26
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  • Jeppe Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 4590 W: 390 N: 4188] (18560)
  • [2006-07-09 16:04]

Hi Miquel
You did a fine choice here giving us a close up of that harbour with that mess of sails and mast's
I like the lone ship in background to give us the best effect.

Regards
Jeppe

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  • bebel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1034 W: 71 N: 1088] (7242)
  • [2006-07-09 16:18]
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ola Miguel !
ce ne sont pas des bateaux à voile mais des bateaux électriques, comme les autoscooters dans les fêtes foraines...
Chouette cadrage et bel effet rendu...
amitiés
Pierrot
(PS j'ai vu Volver, c'est super mais je crois que je te l'avais dit !)

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  • amstel Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 642 W: 55 N: 362] (2103)
  • [2006-07-09 17:30]

Hi Miguel,

It's indeed a kinda chaos, but it's constructive! Very good composition.

Cheers!

Very confusing compo, but I suppose that's the point. Good overall effect. I wonder how it would have worked out with a shallow DoF.

Me gusta esta selva y este desorden, aunque resulta un poco inquietante, no hay donde descansar la mirada. Como supongo que es lo que buscabas, el resultado es el esperado. Buen ojo para captar el abigarramiento y la vida que esconde. Un beso.

Angel.

Hola Miguel
Entiendo bien lo que quieres hacer aqui pero creo que hay muchos detalles escondiendo muchos detalles. Creo que cortar tanto abajo como arriba para poder por lo menos percibir la forma del barco haria maravillas para la foto.
UN saludo
Daniel

Dios mio! Que rollo es eso! y el barco en centro esta "aparcado" en la tierra?

Hi Miguel
Very high impact shot filling the whole frame with these poles. Nice colour, sharpness and depth. The detail is also impressive with lots to notice. Well done.
Aubrey

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  • zeca Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3010 W: 162 N: 4291] (18098)
  • [2006-08-20 11:39]

Hello Miguel!
Nice capture from the marina scenery. I love to visit this kind of places! Your POV is excelent and the picture very artistic.
Regards,
Zeca

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