Sunset in the gironde. I especially liked the sun through the clouds and the reflect in the water in the middle of the picture.
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BobTrips (1857) 2003-03-29 17:23
I like this picture, good framing, good (is it sepia?) tones.
I think it would be better with more contrast and sharpening.
Try cropping up from the bottom at a couple of places, the beginning of the water and at the top of the three leaf cluster. I think that will take the eye more to the water.
It's just slightly crooked.
Probably the thing that I like least is the amount of refraction on the tree trunk, it draws my eye to there too much. If there was some way to reduce it slightly.
I think I'm out of Workshop allowance for the day or I'd put one up for you.