On dry ground Photo

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Ships on the dry dock of Camaret ready for refurbishment of their body.

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KLB (17824) 2009-06-25 2:20

Hello Thomas

Excellent idea !
You've done a very creative work here.
Your framing is perfect, with a great use of the diagonale, and you've chosen a perfect aperture to get this marvelous bokeh.
Great shot, well done.

Regards
Karine

Aviller (3086) 2009-06-25 3:25

Fascinating capture. I like the DOF and the way the different textures and colors are shown within the picture. I might have tried to get the entire ship in focus by perhaps closing the aperture a bit more but that's just my personal taste.

eversmile (5969) 2009-06-25 7:12

Hi Thomas

I like your abstraction. The colors are lovely. While the clear background shines like a jewel, the sharp front offers a detailled view on the moss... that's charming. The graphism is good, with the diagonal line. I just wonder if you could have adjusted your frame, to make the horizontal lines (the white border on the boat and the edge in the background) to converge ? Could have been interesting...

Regards
Marine

akm (640) 2009-06-25 14:40

Hello Thomas,
A very nice graphic -- really well seen and captured.
Regards,
Mary

marion44 (4222) 2009-06-26 6:12

Hello Thomas,I really like your gallery and the way you show beautiful Brittany. Excellent composition, very original, I like the diagonal enhanced by the opposition cold/warm colors.
Well done :)
Marion

chawax (5745) 2009-06-27 0:53

Hi Thomas,
Docks are a nice place to find graphical subjects, and you found one ! The colours and the texture of this ship body is very interesting. The bokeh is very well done, but I think you gave too much space to it. I think you should have moved your camera to the right so that the ship took more place in the composition.
Regards,
Olivier