Golden vineyards Photo

Photographer’s Note

In the "entre 2 mers", after the harvesting, vienyards are going to get autumn hues. Question: are yellow leaves for the yellow wine and the red ones for red wines?

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dta (6145) 2009-11-07 2:01

Bonjour Claude ,
L'arrière plan violacé est un peu curieux , mais alors , ces rangs de vignes qui mêlent jaune , rouge et vert , sont d'un graphisme superbe .
Amicalement

jasmis (51023) 2009-11-07 2:09

Splendid photo of this marvellous carpet.
Regards.

polpo56 (8120) 2009-11-07 2:20

Bonjour Claude,
the composition and the colors of your pictures are very beautiful, but unfortunately it has a serious problem of sharpness. Why shoot at 1 /15 at f8instead use 1 /60 at f4? I think you would have avoided the rough and the picture would come better.
Have a nice Weekend
Ludo

avene (11140) 2009-11-07 7:26

hello Claude,
the scene has a great potential, but this photo needs several improvements.
first, compositionally I'l crop from the left, the empty space is distracting, the eye sort of falls in it. the rolling hills and strong lines of the vineyard are great, pitty you didn't have an opportunity to spend more time there.
second, and more importantly, the quality. I agree with Ludo, 1/15 at any focal length is way too slow (by the way, the EXIF data shows 80mm), I try to never gow below 1/200 with 200mm, even with VR lens. the photo is blurred, and I'm sorry to say that some sharpening has made it even worse, it is impossible to see separate leaves. also, there's very strong magenta colour cast that makes colours look unreal.
hope you don't mind my honest opinion.

best,
Kristine

AiresSantos (42924) 2009-11-07 13:09

Hi Claude
Despite the lack of sharpness it is a very beautiful composition.
I like a lot the colours and rows
Have a fine weekend
Aires

amaryllis (17826) 2009-11-07 13:37

Bonjour
que d'or sur cette photo, ces couleurs de vignes sont extras, une belle symétrie, des couleurs magnifiques
un bon cadrage
juliette

Morac (20891) 2009-11-07 14:01

Bonsoir Clodo,

Et dans tes couleurs tu oublies le succulent vin poupre ! Ces couleurs sont sublimes !

Nota : je te propose un petit recadrage en WS

Bon dimanche

Marc

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Silvio1953 (42869) 2009-11-08 0:46

Ciao Claude, fantastic golden vineyards, superb light, wonderful colors, splendid graphic, very well done, have a good Sunday, ciao Silvio

patdeph (18346) 2009-11-09 8:44

bonjour Claude
les couleurs sont étranges,mais belles et lumineuses,et le graphisme donné par les rangées de vignes très bien vu!Le recadrage proposé par Marc est juducieux,je me demande si je n'aurais pas aussi supprimé les arbres de l'arrière-plan,pour un impact plus fort!
Amicalement
Pascale

Silversnow (2121) 2009-11-09 10:30

Fantastic colors you have there, a tiny bit blurry in the background but definitely interesting patterns in the vine yard :)

clio (23069) 2009-11-11 22:14

Salut Claude,
Réponse à ta question: sans aucun doute puisque aux feuilles vertes correspond le vin vert!!!
Très beau ce moutonnement jaune qui vient buter sur les arbres repeints dans des teintes mauves. Un beau travail de compo et de couleurs.
Très bonne journée
Diane